3-06. The Bounty.

Geordi (LeVar Burton) is wary about helping Picard.

Original Air Date: Mar. 23, 2023. Written by: Christopher Monfette. Directed by: Dan Liu.


THE PLOT:

After picking up Worf and Raffi, Picard directs the Titan to Daystrom Station, the source of the theft that kicked off the changelings' plan. They know that the portal gun was stolen from there... but they also know that something else was taken, and they need to get a look at the manifest to determine what that was.

Riker, Worf, and Raffi beam over, but Starfleet patrols force the Titan to flee. They go to the Fleet Museum at Athan Prime, which is overseen by Picard's old friend, Geordi LaForge. Picard is hoping for help in rescuing his Away Team before they are discovered. Geordi is sympathetic, but he draws the line at putting his family in danger... much to the annoyance of his daughter Sidney, the Titan's navigator, who hatches her own plan with the help of Jack Crusher.

At Daystrom, Riker, Worf, and Raffi evade a complex AI that is controlled by an old adversary - one that has a particular song stuck in its head...


CHARACTERS:

Picard: Dr. Crusher lets him know that Jack has inherited Irumodic Syndrome from him, which sets him to reflecting about how parents cannot choose which parts of them find their way into their children. This makes him more receptive to Geordi's worries about Sidney than he otherwise might have been, and so he doesn't argue when his former chief engineer hesitates to offer direct aid. There's an amusing moment when the plan hatched by Jack and Sidney comes to light. Picard initially starts denying that he has deceived Geordi, only for both men to realize in the same instant that their respective children are responsible.

Riker: There's a callback to Encounter at Farpoint when Riker recognizes the song their AI adversary is wrestling with. I'm sure some complained about the scene invoking nostalgia, complete with archive footage of Farpoint pasted in. In my opinion, it's actually a good scene. Nostalgia is not a bad thing in itself; it's only bad when the only purpose served is nostalgia for its own sake. The moment in question builds mystery before advancing the story, the song paving the way to a major reveal. It also allows Riker to show his cleverness.

Worf: When he observes the awkward reunion of Seven and Raffi, he starts to speak philosophically about the "therapeutic" value he found in completing missions with lovers. Seven interrupts, telling him that she's not going, at which point Worf drops the act and admits: "That is a relief." Michael Dorn's delivery makes this simple line extremely funny. When Riker teases him about recoiling from a tribble, he grouses about the other man still "finding humor in other people's discomfort." I like this brief glimpse at attributes of Riker that he doesn't much like, particularly since it remains clear that he absolutely respects him in spite of that.

Raffi: I had hoped her dialogue in the premiere about breaking up with Seven (again) was just part of her cover. After all, Season Two spent a fair chunk of its running time making them work as a couple, so it would have seemed odd to just discard all that. In addition, I think there would be value in showing the otherwise ridiculously baggage-laden Raffi in an easygoing and healthy relationship. No such luck. So here's my new wish: Just keep them broken up, please. I don't dislike Raffi, and I think Michelle Hurd is good in the role. But I grew weary of the character's seemingly infinite stores of "drama" a while ago.

Jack Crusher: His hallucinations from the last episode are explained away as the medical condition he inherited from Picard. It's a handwave, and I seriously doubt this thread is over with. Still, it allows actor Ed Speleers to give a more relaxed performance. I rather enjoyed the scenes featuring him plotting (and flirting) with Sidney LaForge, and he and Ashlei Sharpe Chestnut make for a cute screen couple.

Sidney LaForge: She has slowly emerged from the background to become an engaging character in her own right. She's charmed by Jack, something that Geordi doesn't much appreciate. She also chafes at her father's overprotectiveness. There's some strain in their relationship because she became a navigator instead of an engineer. As she tells her father: "You built amazing things... I just wanted to fly them."

Geordi: LeVar Burton makes a welcome return. He plays Geordi's dilemma well. He doesn't doubt Picard for an instant, and old instincts cry out for him to help. At the same time, he has a family to protect, and he sees that as his primary responsibility. When circumstances change, however, he doesn't hesitate to jump in with his expertise.


THOUGHTS:

The Bounty is a good episode. It advances the overall plot. It features two threads, both of which work: The infiltration of Daystrom and Picard's efforts to seek help from Geordi. These two plots are well connected. Picard goes to Geordi because he was forced to leave Riker's team on Daystrom, and he hopes his old friend will help him rescue them.

The Away Team plot also lends urgency to the Picard/Geordi scenes. The script has already established that Riker, Worf, and Raffi have a limited window before they're detected. Picard needs to get back to them, both to rescue them and to find out answers, so a ticking clock runs through the episode. The Jack/Sidney scenes are fun on their own, but they also mesh with the larger situation. At the same time, Geordi's strained relationship with Sidney and Picard's worries about Jack allow for a certain thematic unity, with two fathers both concerned about the ways they have and haven't influenced their children.

Though I enjoyed this, I do think it's a step down from the previous three episodes. There's a fakeout with an old adversary, but it doesn't end up coming to much. This figure appears just long enough to evoke some nostalgia and for his presence to cover up the big reveal. I would have liked a little more, and the lack of that feels like a missed opportunity.

That's made up for by the big reveal, which is handled well. Complications are set up for the next episodes, but it never feels as if those complications are the whole point. Contrast with Season Two, in which multiple episodes seemed to exist only to set up the following installment. Thus far, almost every episode of Season Three has worked as its own entity, even while setting up future events, which makes the viewing of the individual pieces a lot more satisfying.


OVERALL:

The Bounty is another good episode in what's shaping up to be easily Picard's best season. It's not quite up to the standard set by the last few shows - but it's still entertaining, with a number of good character moments.


Overall Rating: 7/10.

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3-02. Disengage.

Picard meets his adversary: grinning, soft-spoken Capt. Vadic (Amanda Plummer).

Original Air Date: Feb. 23, 2023. Written by: Christopher Monfette, Sean Tretta. Directed by: Douglas Aarniokoski.


THE PLOT:

Picard and Riker have found Beverly - unconscious, being kept alive inside a medical pod overseen by the only other person on the ship: Jack Crusher (Ed Speleers), her twenty-year-old son (who doesn't look a day over thirty). Jack tells them that they've been dodging their pursuers for two weeks. He denies any knowledge of who is chasing them or what they might want.

One thing is clear: The Crushers' small ship lacks the resources to fend off the enemy. They are saved only by the intervention of the Titan, with Capt. Shaw coming to their rescue against his better instincts.

After Shaw beams them aboard the starship, he receives a transmission that puts a face to their adversary: the genial, smiling Capt. Vadic (Amanda Plummer). Vadic claims to be a bounty hunter, informing them that Jack Crusher is a wanted criminal.

The Titan had to cross out of Federation space to rescue Picard, and the nebula Jack and Beverly were hiding in has made it impossible to simply call Starfleet for reinforcements. In addition, Vadic's weaponry is such that she's basically flying a single-ship armada. She gives Picard and Shaw one hour to either surrender Jack Crusher or be destroyed!


CHARACTERS:

Picard: He's clever enough to recognize that Jack is the enemy's target. He plants transport inhibitors that save the young man... but he also forgets to deactivate them when the Titan comes to the rescue. He's in a position of weakness with Capt. Shaw, who is determined to be as unimpressed with him as possible. Still, he feigns being in charge to both Jack and Vadic. In the end, he comes up with a tactic to shake Vadic, one which Shaw goes along with - but it feels less like a victory than like something that just buys the Titan a little more time.

Riker: He gets a less robust role in this episode, mainly just acting as Picard's support. He does recognize the stalemate between Picard and Shaw, however, and he knows that something has to be done to break it. This leads him to take decisive action near the end.

Seven of Nine: When Shaw stops her from immediately flying to Picard's rescue, the bridge crew seems startled by this. Seven shifts tactics at this point, pointing out to Shaw that if he insists on following regulations to the letter, he'll be remembered as the man who let Picard and Riker die - an approach that proves effective in getting his attention.

Raffi: Still stuck in subplot-land, with her instincts unable to let her accept her handler's simple answer to the terrorist attack. She disobeys an order to "disengage" and instead follows a lead to Sneed (Aaron Stanford), a Ferengi crime lord. All of this is... fine. But the only moment in this strand that catches my eye is the very last part of her last scene. Outside of that, Raffi's strand is the least engaging part of the episode. Again.

Jack Crusher: After only appearing briefly in the premiere, Ed Speleers' Jack gets a much larger slice of the action. We open on him talking his way through an interaction with a Fenris Ranger (Robert G. Morgan) two weeks earlier. He seems to have the situation in hand... until the Ranger sends word to "the Marked Woman," and we realize that this kicked off the current chase. Jack has the manner of a con artist, but he's not unlikable, and Speleers does well with his expanded role. But why insist on him being twenty? The timeline would still line up if he was thirty, and... Sorry, Speleers looks great and all, but it's obvious that he's older than that.

Vadic: This episode gives the enemy a face: Amanda Plummer as Capt. Vadic. She speaks in a soft, somewhat exaggerated Southern drawl, seeming like she's almost settling in for a chat with Picard and Shaw even as she threatens them with destruction. Based on this appearance, I'm not yet sure whether she's going to end up being great or annoying. She works well enough here, but I hope she receives some more varied notes in later episodes.

Capt. Shaw: His characterization is vastly improved from the first episode. The thing is, Shaw isn't actually wrong about anything. Every one of his direct responses and objections to this situation, and to Picard and Seven having forced him into it, are valid. He's still pointlessly antagonistic, but the dial on that has mercifully been turned down a bit. He knows to present a unified front with Picard when talking to Vadic; and when Picard gives his final (predictable) reason for wanting to protect Jack, he stops arguing and gives in.


THOUGHTS:

I promise I'm not going to complain about this in every Season Three review, but I really don't like the visual look of this season. I don't like how dark the screen is, and I don't care for the heavy color grading in some scenes. I understand that the showrunners are trying to create a tense, oppressive mood... but it's overaggressive, and some touches (notably the direct visual references to Blade Runner in the Raffi subplot) feel hackneyed.

That aside, Disengage is a decent second episode. It benefits from improved characterization for Shaw, who's still an antagonist but who isn't actually in the wrong. In the premiere, he was a one-note pompous bureaucrat; in this episode, he actually works, mainly because the writers cut back on the pointless belligerence and make sure that we understand his perspective.

There's some tension inherent in the ticking clock of Vadic's deadline, which is enhanced by the unanswered question as to how trustworthy or not Jack might actually be. There's no question that Vadic is a villain, but she doesn't come across as someone who does things for no reason. This leaves open the question of how Jack managed to provoke this pursuit.

The episode does suffer from a common problem with streaming series: Its role is mainly to connect the first episode with the next, and it isn't even remotely a complete unit in itself. It remains entertaining throughout, though. This season doesn't have me fully on board yet - but I am feeling hopeful that it might as it goes along.


OVERALL:

Since Disengage comes across mainly as connective tissue, it's hard for me to fully judge it in its own right. It does its job. It builds up the story, adding complications while introducing new characters and new elements. Judged by itself, though, I don't think it's particularly better than OK.

At the same time, it's definitely no worse than OK - and by adding some layers to Shaw while giving several good moments to the more established characters, it raises hopes for the rest of the season to build on it.


Overall Rating: 6/10.

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2-10. Farewell.

Picard and Q share an emotional farewell.

Original Air Date: May 5, 2022. Written by: Christopher Monfette, Akiva Goldsman. Directed by: Michael Weaver.


THE PLOT:

The Borg Queen-possessed Jurati has gone, departing for the Delta Quadrant in La Sirena and leaving the others on 21st century Earth. They have no way to get home; but with Renée Picard ready to launch in the Europa mission in a matter of hours, at least the future seems to be back on track.

Except for Adam Soong...

Soong remains determined to stop Renée and to secure his legacy as the hero of a dark and twisted Earth. Wielding outsized financial influence like a weapon, he demands "face time" with Renée before launch - a one-on-one conversation that he will make sure is her last.

Picard and Tallinn beam to the launch site to stop him. Meanwhile, the others discover that Soong has a back-up plan: weaponized drones that are set to target the shuttle on lift-off!


CHARACTERS:

Picard: Accompanies Tallinn against her wishes, in large part because of his fear of losing someone else. On that mission, he proves to be approximately as useful as a spare tire with a nail through its center. Thankfully, he gets some good material in the back half of the episode: an emotional final scene with Q, then a return to the Borg confrontation that started all this, with him exhibiting both patience and authority.

Seven: There's a nice follow-up to her conversation with Raffi in the last episode, when she recalled her rejection by Starfleet - something that Picard effectively fixes with a single order. She's open to rekindling her relationship with Raffi. Not that she's blind to Raffi's flaws: When Raffi starts overthinking a kiss, Seven tells her to just "let it breathe" with a mix of exasperation and amusement.

Tallinn: "You won't let me? It's not up to you!" Finally, a spark of Tallinn's original characterization returns when she snaps at Picard after he insists on accompanying her. Not that one can blame Picard for assuming that he has a say in Tallinn's actions, given that Two of One was the last episode to see her do anything other than tag along after him. Tallinn finally comes face to face with Renée, the assignment who has become a surrogate daughter to her, in a well-written and heartfelt exchange. Her final scene with Picard, however, goes on far too long, with (yet another) speech that retreads a lot of the ground as her speeches in Monsters and Hide and Seek.

Adam Soong: He was introduced as a disgraced scientist who was begging for more funding. Um... why? Based on this episode, he must have enough money to make Elon Musk jealous. I'll ignore the military drones, as those presumably came from the Borg Queen - but he's somehow donated enough to the Europa mission to be able to demand "face time" with astronauts, violating protocols that even American Presidents are expected to follow and with not so much as a security escort. In reality, I'd fully expect his demands would end in "face time" with large, uniformed officers walking him to the nearest exit.

Guinan: Whoopi Goldberg returns to bookend her appearance in the season opener. She fills in the blanks for Picard's crew about what happened after they returned home, since she lived through all of it. She also has a good moment when she thanks Picard for "setting (her) straight" in the past when she was ready to give up on humanity.

Q: "Even gods have favorite, Jean-Luc, and you've always been one of mine." If this does end up being Q's last appearance, at the very least the character is well-treated. His interactions with Picard are emotional, but never too emotional for this mischievous god of sarcasm. He refuses to accept blame for Elnor's death, pointing out that he didn't kill the young man; Seven's "idiot husband" from the alternate timeline did. He also cleans up his mess. As was true in Q Who?, he transports Picard back to where he belongs, making sure his old friend is just a little wiser for the experience.


THOUGHTS:

"Must it always have galactic import? Universal stakes, celestial upheaval? Isn't one life enough? You ask me why it matters. It matters to me!"
-Q reveals the very personal reason behind his actions.

There is much that is good in Farewell. The scenes with Q, and the end scenes with Picard dealing with the Borg back in present, are excellent. Character material is generally strong - again, particularly in the second half, once the plot mechanics are out of the way.

Too bad there's roughly half an episode of crap to wade through to get to the good stuff.

Given that the midseason features so much wheel-spinning, why does all of the activity surrounding the Europa launch feel so rushed? It plays very much as if a full episode of material was condensed into about twenty minutes.

No character in this section of the episode faces any serious obstacles. Soong swans around (a startlingly empty) Mission Control like he's Madame Empress, sneering at actual officials for being "disrespectful" and making demands even though he has exactly zero official standing. I'd immediately give this episode two additional points if they'd thrown him out, forcing him to evade security and improvise in order to reach Renée. This would have created some suspense and would have made the worst part of the episode feel at least a bit more convincing... but it also would have taken time; and after deviations like an entire episode devoted to Picard's bad dreams, time is now a luxury the season just doesn't have.

The lack of obstacles applies equally to our heroes. Picard and Tallinn encounter the same absence of security - or any other staff - that Soong does. Tallinn steals a flight suit from one room, then walks right in on Renée in another. Convenience stores do more to guard chocolate bars! The episode at least pretends that it's hard for Rios, Raffi, and Seven to stop the drones... but it's still the work of a few minutes, with Raffi punching some buttons to gain manual control before Rios saves the day by essentially playing a video game.

The showrunners should have cut some of the fat out of the mid-season and used that extra time to develop the Europa launch into a full episode. Then the finale could have just been epilogue, which would have been a match for the premiere being the prologue. The Q/Picard, Seven/Raffi, and Picard/Borg scenes are the bits of the episode that work, so I certainly wouldn't object to there being a bit more of it. Maybe we could check in on Soji, who seemed to have a firm friendship with Jurati in the first episode. It wouldn't even have cost much extra, given that Isa Briones is already in the episode, and this might have shown Jurati's change affecting someone on an emotional level.

Oh, and I will give points to a surprise cameo by a TNG character. I did not see that coming, and I rather liked how this appearance was woven in.


OVERALL:

Farewell is an episode of two halves. The first part is mostly terrible, unconvincing and inexcusably rushed. The rest almost makes up for it with some excellent character material. Unsurprisingly, the scenes between Patrick Stewart and John de Lancie are the highlights, but there are good moments for almost everybody.

This episode is much like the season it closes. There are plenty of elements to enjoy... but enjoying the good requires having a fair amount of patience with the bad. In the end, I'd have to rate both this finale and the season itself as a disappointment.


Overall Rating: 5/10.

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2-03. Assimiliation.

Raffi tends to a dying Elnor.

Original Air Date: Mar. 17, 2022. Written by: Kiley Rossetter, Christopher Monfette. Directed by: Lea Thompson.


THE PLOT:

Picard, his crew, and the Borg Queen beam to the alternate universe's version of La Sirena. Elnor is shot during the escape. Raffi tries to treat his wounds with the meager supplies in sickbay as the others complete the slingshot maneuver to go back to 2024. They reach their destination - but the ship loses power and, without sickbay's biobed to sustain him, Elnor dies.

The Borg Queen is unconscious, and the only clue they have is the Queen's words about a "watcher" in Los Angeles. Raffi, Seven, and Rios beam off the ship to search for non-human and/or non-contemporary signals. Picard and Jurati stay on board to attempt to revive the Queen to get answers. Given her current condition, Jurati can see only one way to repair the damage: to connect with the Queen, risking assimilation!


CHARACTERS:

Picard: He allows Raffi to rail against him, right up to the point that she compares him to Q, an accusation that he firmly rejects. Elnor was practically a surrogate son to him, so I have no doubt that his own grief dwarfs Raffi's current bitterness. Even so, he won't allow himself to feel it right now, when a mission affecting the entire future is at stake. He allows Jurati to meld with the Borg Queen for the same reason. He doesn't want to take such a risk with her life and consciousness - but there's no viable alternative.

Dr. Jurati: Demonstrates surprising authority when laying out the time travel rules for the Away Team: "No hospitals, no authorities, no security checkpoints. Anything that can scan you, it can find the ID implants... from a future that doesn't exist yet." She also doesn't allow Rios to take his weapon, pointing out the damage to the timeline if he were to lose it.

When she volunteers to be connected to the Borg Queen, she shows full faith in Picard to keep her safe. While her higher functions complete the repair, her subconcious talks to Picard and almost immediately reveals that she thinks of him as a father figure. She is afraid of the Queen... but she's also fascinated by her, to a degree that seems likely to be dangerous. Alison Pill is terrific, particularly in the melding scene as Jurati runs through a series of different emotions.

Elnor: Dies after being shot by one of the guards from the alternate timeline. Assuming that it sticks, I have to give points to the Picard creative team. Elnor dies an essentially pointless death, which was what the TNG staff were going for with Tasha Yar. This works much better than her death in Skin of Evil, thanks to the reactions of the others - particularly Raffi, who tries fruitlessly to save him and then spends the rest of the episode in a fury of activity (and fury in general) in response.

Raffi: She clings to the hope that fixing the timeline will result in Elnor's resurrection, filtering out Jurati's response that she doesn't know if that will happen. She is stricken after watching the death of this young man for whom she felt so protective. She lashes out Picard for taking time to save the Borg Queen while Elnor died, declaring her "sharp disappointment in (his) leadership."

Seven of Nine: Finally, for the first time in the series, gets some actual screen time with her love interest! It turns out that they do work together onscreen, though I will continue to insist that their relationship should have been allowed to develop rather than simply being plunked down as Established. Seven makes two attempts to comfort Raffi, first nonverbally and then by offering to talk. Both are rejected. She thinks fast when a 21st century security guard discovers her and Raffi where they aren't supposed to be, and she is astonished when this stranger actually seems to like her. Raffi is less than impressed.

Capt. Rios: Has the misfortune to beam into a, um, gravitationally untenable situation. He ends up with a concussion, and he is taken to a free clinic by well-meaning strangers. Santiago Cabrera gets some nice moments opposite Teresa Ramirez (Sol Rodriguez), a pretty young doctor with a precocious son. His scenes with these two allow him to show a softer side to Rios's character.

Hot Human Earth Doctor of the Week: Teresa seems a bit too idealized. She treats her patients for free, she's observant enough of her young son to keep tabs on his activities even in the midst of a very demanding job, and she's courageous in dealing with the authorities. Should we canonize her now or wait to see how the statue turns out? Fortunately, actress Sol Rodriguez injects an appealing amount of skepticism and humor into her scenes with Rios, which goes a long way toward making Teresa likeable. That said, I really hope the character gets a few flaws or at least blind spots before the season's end.

Borg Queen: During the escape, she assimilates with the ship. She so quickly disposes of their pursuers that I found myself wondering exactly how the alternate universe fascists managed to defeat her in the first place. When Jurati connects to heal her, the Queen probes around her subconscious, manipulating her emotions to try to gain control. Though she's still in a position of physical weakness, her final lines make clear that she is very much a threat.

Q: Is only seen for a few seconds, but those seconds are interesting, as he insists to Picard that "this is the only kind of life you understand" even as the enemy ships take damage. This not only echoes Q's statements from the last episode; it also recalls his very first appearance in Encounter at Farpoint, in which he put humanity on trial for being "a dangerous, savage child race." In Farpoint, as in most of TNG, he was just smug. Now that smugness seems like a thin veneer covering layers of disappointment. At this point, I have no idea what's motivating it - but I don't think he's just "playing games," and I certainly don't think he's insane.


THOUGHTS:

This episode was directed by Lea Thompson. Yes, the 1980s actress who is probably best known for Back to the Future. That seems appropriate, given this episode's focus on time travel. There's even a fair amount of humor, from Rios's catastrophic pratfall to a child mistaking Seven for a superhero. Not to mention Seven's and Raffi's banter in the scene with the security guard.

Given how grim the first half of the episode is, the humor in the back half is extremely welcome. It's also pitched at the right level, providing the viewer a bit of relief without distracting from the emotions Raffi is feeling or the ones that Picard isn't letting himself feel.

One area in which Season Two is excelling so far is in its use of the ensemble. Each of the regulars receives one or two good scenes. The emotional focus is on Raffi, while the story focus remains with Picard, Jurati, and the Borg Queen. But the script also shows Seven's strange sense of comfort with this new setting, and it gives Rios some choice scenes at the clinic. Even Elnor is well-used despite minimal screen time, with his death impacting the others and his last words to Raffi perfectly judged.

The standout moment of the episode is Jurati connecting with the Borg Queen. The lighting is dim and tinged with green, infusing a sense of the mechanical. As the Queen probes Jurati's emotions, she snarls in anger - but she only seems on the verge of truly losing herself when the Queen explores her sadness.

All three actors are superb here, and the scene is well staged and well shot. The camera slowly creeps in on Picard and Jurati at the start, sitting opposite each other with the Queen looming over them in the background. Close-ups of Jurati show her pale skin washed out by the Queen's mechanical green light. Then Jurati speaks through the Queen while the Queen speaks through Jurati, a suitably eerie moment. It ends with a great little button from Jurati - a moment of victory here... but judging from the Queen's reaction, one that will have consequences.


OVERALL:

Assimilation is my favorite episode of the season so far. It balances multiple elements and shifts in tone: action, strong emotion, comedy, and even a moment of horror. It skips between these tones seemingly without effort, and I never felt jarred by any of the transitions.

I'm still skeptical about centering an entire season around a time travel story. Still, with its several fine character moments and excellent use of the ensemble, this episode on its own terms was a joy to watch.


Overall Rating: 9/10.

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2-02. Penance.

Q transports Picard to an alternate reality in which he's a bloodthirsty, xenophobic conqueror.

Original Air Date: Mar. 10, 2022. Teleplay by: Akiva Goldsman, Terry Matalas, Christopher Monfette. Story by: Michael Chabon, Akiva Goldsman, Terry Matalas, Christopher Monfette. Directed by: Douglas Aarniokoski.


THE PLOT:

After activating the self-destruct on The Star Gazer, Jean-Luc Picard is dead. Or at least, he should be.

Instead, he is back at Chateau Picard, and he has company: Q (John DeLancie), who portentously announces that Picard is at "the very end of the road not taken." Q shows him around the chateau as it is now. Picard has robotic servants. The work is still being done by displaced Romulans - slaves taken during the human conquest of Romulus. "General Picard" has a trophy room with the skulls of his enemies, including Gul Dukat, Martok, and Sarek.

It is an alternate reality, one in which the Earth is governed by the warlike and xenophobic "Confederation." Q has transferred all of Picard's crew to this new reality. Seven is Earth's President; Raffi, a security chief; Elnor, a dissident; Rios, a starship captain; and Jurati... well, she's pretty much herself - save, as she notes, for an upgrade in torture devices.

Today is Eradication Day, a holiday celebrating humanity's supremacy through the execution of "dissidents, alien sympathizers, (and) terrorists." Among the condemned is a Borg Queen (Annie Wersching), who is able to sense the changes to the timeline. Under questioning, the queen reveals that this reality resulted from a single change to the past. Picard and company will need to go back in time to set things right - but first they will need to escape the watchful eyes of the Confederation!


CHARACTERS:

Picard: Q gives him a head start in grasping the type of reality he's now in, but he still gathers his composure and plays the part of his Fascist Universe Counterpart faster than any of the others manages. Then again, he has a bit of experience at finding himself suddenly living an unfamiliar life. He shows his leadership qualities as soon as he starts meeting the others, improvising quickly but authoritatively to keep Raffi and Elnor out of trouble, then focusing the group on what needs to be done to return to their own timeline.

Seven of Nine: When she wakes up in the Presidential bedroom without her Borg implants, she runs a series of quick sensory tests to make sure that what she's experiencing is real. She tests pain by burning herself, but the most convincing result is smell: "You can't smell in a dream." She recoils at the sight of the Borg Queen. When it becomes clear that they will need the Queen to help them, she is brutal in confronting her, almost gloating at the "pitiful end to the Great Borg Empire."

Dr. Jurati: Though her circumstances are the least changed, she does the worst job of fitting in. The way she stammers and babbles... Well, let's just say that if the Confederation Magistrate didn't already suspect something was "off," then he certainly did after meeting Jurati. She's more effective when actually working a scientific problem, taking down Confederation defenses so that Rios can beam them all safely away. Even then, she can't quite resist having what feels a lot like a marital dispute mid-crisis: "I would hang up on you right now if it wasn't going to get us all killed."

Raffi/Elnor: They make an entertaining duo, with Raffi playing the part of Elnor's captor. Her story about exactly what intelligence she's hoping to extract keeps changing just a little with each new guard she speaks to. At one point, she uses him as a distraction, allowing a couple of guards to beat him while she accesses their security - only to tell him, "Elnor, they're yours," once she has what she needs, at which point he takes great pleasure in demonstrating his martial skills.

Pompous Earth Bureaucrat of the Week: Jon Jon Briones, father of Sonji actress Isa Briones, is the Magistrate - Seven's husband in this reality. The marriage doesn't appear to be overly burdened by love or affection, and the "dear" he punctuates his sentences with sounds more artificial than anything the androids in the show have ever said. He's a weasel, and it isn't hard for either Seven or Picard to bully him into granting them privacy. That said, he does not appear to be stupid, and his facial expressions show that he senses something not quite right about his wife by the end of their first scene together.

Borg Queen: I'll allow that there are still a few Voyager Borg episodes that I haven't seen. Even so, this is the first time I can recall seeing a Borg Queen in a position of helplessness. Her people have been eradicated, leaving her isolated and alone - and as Seven's early Voyager appearances showed, "alone" isn't something Borg manage well. She is able to sense the timeline disturbances, however, recognizing Seven both as Borg and not and Picard as both "Locutus" and not.

Q: Picard wonders if he's unstable. To me, it looks like he's suppressing rage. He talks about how this world is a result of Picard and/or humanity's own choices. "Show them a world of their own making, and they ask what you've done." Picard, confronted with his counterpart's slaves, protests, "I would never" - and Q cuts him off, sneering at these words as "the luxury of the victors" before taking glee in showing off the alternate Picard's collection of gruesome trophies: the skulls of such adversaries as Martok, Sarek, and Gul Dukat. I bet Sisko wouldn't have minded adorning his office with the last of those...


THOUGHTS:

"You're welcome to remain here, in the body of a madman, in the world of a madman - to attempt, like Macbeth, to wash the blood from your hands. But I assure you, Jean-Luc, it's un-washable."
-Q demands penance from Picard.

After The Star Gazer set up the characters' new places, both professionally and emotionally, it falls to this episode to kick-start the plot. An alternate reality/time travel plot - which makes me a bit nervous. Alternate reality and time travel shenanigans can be fun, and Star Trek has delivered some corkers in both areas. But a full season? I worry that it will get... old.

My reservations about the season aside, Penance does its job well. This is an efficient script. The Picard/Q scene sets up the new universe while at the same time giving both Patrick Stewart and John DeLancie to show that time has not diminished their screen rapport. The next Act establishes the new existences of each of the crew. Then the meat of the episode centers around them having to keep up appearances while finding a way to escape from Eradication Day (which really should have been the title of the episode).


AN UNCREATIVE TIMELINE:

My biggest gripe is that the alternate timeline isn't particularly interesting.

Star Trek has shown plenty of alternate realities before, often with memorable results. Mirror, Mirror was a "pure evil" timeline, but there was still a sense of character relationships and power dynamics, and enough of a sense of a society for future books and spinoff series to revel in. Yesterday's Enterprise presented a changed reality in which all the regulars were recognizably themselves, but were altered by living in a militaristic environment.

Penance presents... "The Fascist Future." And there's really nothing more to it than that. The only thing I could truly tell you about this society is that its xenophobic. There aren't even any memorable guest characters. Seven's husband is the only one whose screen time goes beyond "walk-on," and he's pretty much your standard issue weasel. Aside from Picard himself, I had little sense of how the regulars' alternate timeline personalities differed from their regular ones. Never mind the actual alternate timelines I mentioned above: This episode's society feels less lived in than the deliberately over-the-top "fake history" of Voyager's Living Witness!

None of this makes the episode bad. It's well structured, it moves quickly, and it's never less than entertaining. I just wish its alternate reality had a bit more to it.


OVERALL:

Despite the generic setting, Penance does what it needs to do. It sets up the season arc while at the same time giving the characters an episode-specific situation to overcome. It even ends on a pretty decent cliffhanger.

I am worried that the overarching story seems to be focused on time travel and alternate universes, as such stories are usually best reserved for one or two-parters. On its own terms, though, Penance is... well, it's much like Picard itself. It was good, and I enjoyed it - but I couldn't help but feeling that with a bit more creativity, it could have been better.


Overall Rating: 7/10.

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