Showing posts with label Terry Matalas. Show all posts
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Friday, February 7, 2025

3-10. The Last Generation.

Picard and the Enterprise save the Earth one last time.
Picard and the Enterprise save the Earth one last time.

Original Air Date: Apr. 20, 2023. Written by: Terry Matalas. Directed by: Terry Matalas.


THE PLOT:

The Borg have taken control of Starfleet!

With Jack in the Borg Queen (Alice Krige)'s clutches and acting as a transmitter, the Borg have remotely assimilated every Starfleet officer under age 25, granting them total control over all the starships assembled for Frontier Day. Earth's Spacedock is managing to hold off the assault, but Riker grimly observes that their defenses won't last long.

Seven and Raffi retake the Titan, using the ship's cloaking device to evade the Borg signal. Seven launches a series of sudden, short attacks on the assimilated starships to buy additional time. Meanwhile, Picard and his team take the reconstructed Enterprise D to the Borg Cube to confront the Queen directly. For Picard, it's a last chance to face his greatest enemy - and to rescue his son.


CHARACTERS:

Picard: It's clear that he doesn't expect to come back. The first half of the episode sees him making a series of farewells - to his old crew, to Riker specifically, and to Beverly. He not only forgives Beverly for keeping Jack's existence a secret, he acknowledges her choice in prioritizing the protection of their son: "You thought of Jack from the beginning, shielding him from danger. You did everything right." He faces his greatest fear - reassimilation by the Borg - in order to connect with his son. But first he directly gives Riker command of the mission: "I can no longer be your captain. I now have to be a father."

Riker: He is instantly nervous when they beam to the Borg Cube and discover no drones waiting for them. He observes that in all his years, he never had a "too quiet" moment that turned out well. As a father himself, he understands Picard's priorities completely. When the Enterprise tells him that time is growing short and that the ship will have to take action, Riker refuses to beam out without Picard, even knowing that this decision might mean his death.

Worf: "There was a moment today where I was worried we might actually survive." Worf has been awesome all season, and that carries through to the finale. He doesn't hesitate to join Picard and Riker in beaming to the Cube, even though he seems fatalistically resigned to their likely fate. He also acknowledges his friendship with Raffi with a particularly well-judged gift.

Data: Admits that he is having some trouble adjusting to having full emotions. Not, thankfully, in the manner of Star Trek: Generations' annoying "emotion chip" subplot, but rather in the way ordinary people sometimes struggle with strong emotions: an image that evokes nostalgia, such as a crew member petting a cat, or a strong feeling of hatred for the Borg over the misery they cause. This is generally well written, getting just enough attention to convince as part of Data's journey without being allowed to distract from the main plot.

Seven of Nine: The script wisely focuses on the TNG crew, splitting Seven and Raffi off in their own subplot on the Titan. Seven improvises like mad to disrupt the Borg plan as much as she can with the limited resources available. She is left with a very small crew that includes a nervous cook with some past piloting experience. She deals well with this, encouraging the man without coddling him. The implications of a modification she and Raffi make to their phasers is something that I'd love to see future Trek projects address, by the way.

Jack Crusher: It's made clear why his capture was so essential to the villains, as the Borg need him to transmit their assimilation signal. This does mostly make him more a plot device than a character in this episode: the mechanism of the Borg plan and the object of Picard's attempted rescue. Still, he gets a decent character moment within the Collective, where he finds the sense of belonging that's always eluded him - which is what Picard has to argue and urge against when he connects with him near the end.

Others: This season has a large ensemble, and it's inevitable that some characters will be moved to the background. To writer Terry Matalas's credit, every regular gets at least one moment. Geordi is left in command of the Enterprise, and he trusts Data with a near-impossible task. Dr. Crusher shows remarkable competence at tactical, surprising the others; as she explains, she hasn't exactly been idle over the last twenty years, which have involved a lot of running from various adversaries. Deanna's strong connection to Riker plays a critical role at the end. Meanwhile, on the Titan, Raffi provides unwavering support to Seven - though her best character scene comes opposite Worf. None of them are the focus of the episode, but they all get a moment or two to shine.


THOUGHTS:

Season Three of Picard has revolved, in large part, around themes of family and connection. The Last Generation does an excellent job of folding these into both the story and its resolution. Picard and Jack have awkwardly attempted to connect as father and son all season. By contrast, Jack's assimilation by the Borg sees him feeling an instant and effortless connection, one that Picard attempts to persuade him is illusory.

The Borg Queen describes the Cube as Picard's "true family." Picard reaches Jack through sacrifice: surrendering his command to "be a father" and facing his greatest fear in order to reach him. Deanna's link to Riker (her family) plays a major role in the climax. Even the epilogue carries the theme through, from Raffi's reconciliation with her son to the final scene of the old TNG crew sitting down for a hand of poker as the credits roll.

While I find myself somewhat missing the standalone storytelling of older Trek series, a well-paced season arc offers a big advantage: If previous episodes have done their jobs properly, the finale can hit the ground running. Previous episodes of this season established the overall relationships, as well as the situation and the stakes. That leaves this episode free to zip right into the action. The threads are quickly established: Seven on the Titan, trying to delay the Borg attack; Picard, Riker, and Worf on the Borg Cube; and the Enterprise crew. The episode moves quickly, with plenty of action and incident, but it never feels rushed or overstuffed. As a result, in addition to thematic unity, The Last Generation benefits from being extremely enjoyable to watch.

Complaints are relatively minor. The Seven/Raffi strand feels a bit disconnected from the rest of the episode; it would not be difficult to rewrite this script to remove them entirely. The worry I expressed in the previous review, that the Borg would render the previous changeling threat into an afterthought, ends up being fully realized. Exposition tells us that the changelings were important to the Borg plan. Still, after previous episodes made the changeling infiltration all encompassing, leaving Picard and his crew with nowhere to turn for help, in this episode the changelings are suddenly unmentioned and irrelevant. I could charitably posit that, after the failure of the plan, the infiltrators decided to pull out and wait for another opportunity... but it does feel as if the changelings went from practically omnipotent in previous episodes to borderline irrelevant at the end.


OVERALL:

Despite my gripe about the treatment of the changelings, this was an overall excellent finale. It uses themes established throughout the season in a way that connects both to the overall threat and to the characters. It finds important things for every character to do. It also moves fast and is highly enjoayble to watch.

I'll put more thoughts together about the season as a whole for my season overview. Ultimately, though, Picard's best season ends on a strong note. It's not quite the season's best episode - but it's a good episode, and a worthy finale.


Overall Rating: 8/10.

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Friday, January 31, 2025

3-09. Võx.

An old enemy lies behind the mysterious red door in Jack's subconscious...
An old enemy lies behind the mysterious red door in Jack's subconscious...

Original Air Date: Apr. 13, 2023. Written by: Sean Tretta, Kiley Rossetter. Directed by: Terry Matalas.


THE PLOT:

With the Frontier Day celebration about to begin, and still with little idea what the changelings are planning or why they are pursuing Jack, Deanna uses her abilities to try to guide the young man into opening the red door that lies in his subconscious. She is able to prod Jack into opening the door - and is shocked to discover the Borg waiting on the other side!

When the Borg assimilated Picard and turned him into Locutus, they also rewrote his DNA. This is the source of Jack's abilities. He is a Borg "transmitter," able to seize control of assimilated or partially assimilated Borg. Jack responds to the news by fleeing, stealing a shuttle and taking off for an unknown area of space.

Picard does not have the luxury of following. If Jack's abilities were Borg, then how was he able to take control of members of the Titan crew? The answer lies in the theft of Picard's original remains from Daystrom - and in the transporters the changelings have been using throughout Starfleet.

Picard and his crew rush back toward Earth. It may already be too late to stop a disaster, however. Thanks to the changeling infiltrators, the Borg assimilation of Starfleet has already begun - without anyone even noticing it...


CHARACTERS:

Picard: "It's my responsibility. I'm the cause. It's my fault." Picard already felt guilt at Jack inheriting his Irumodic Syndrome, which is only worsened when he discovers that what Jack inherited was actually a link to the Borg Collective. The scars of his own assimilation affect his attempt to talk to Jack. His usual compassion is blunted by his memories of being forced to do the Borg's bidding. He prioritizes the need for precautions over clear explanations, which only pushes Jack to flee that much faster than he otherwise might have.

Deanna: The instant she sees the Borg in Jack's mind, she leaves, locking him in sickbay as she runs to tell the others what she's found. This is the right thing to do; for all she knows, telling Jack might activate some dormant program. However, it also makes a lie out of her promise that whatever's behind that red door, he won't be left to face it alone - adding an extra dollop of betrayal onto the young man's fear.

Jack Crusher: It's hardly surprising Jack is thrown into turmoil. Within a short time frame, he's had his existence turned upside down: he's been hunted, he's been told that he has Irumodic Syndrome, he's discovered that he has impossible abilities, he's had Vadic dangle the prospect of answers in front of him, and now he learns that he's a product of the Borg's assimilation of his father. There's basically been no rest for him to come to terms with anything. The action that he settles on is rash and ill-advised... but given his week, I'd have been surprised if he had been in a fit state to stop, think, and listen at this point.

Capt. Shaw: After realizing the Borg connection, Picard orders the ship to Earth. This prompts Shaw, in his role as the Designated Realist, to point out that everyone who is hunting them will be there. But when Picard tells him that this is their only option, he no longer argues. Instead, he lets out a resigned sigh - "Of course it is." - and gives the order. Over the course of the season, he's gone from an adversary to a proper member of Picard's crew, albeit one who doesn't hesitate to point out uncomfortable realities. He also is once again paired with Seven, finally showing her the respect of calling her the name she identifies with.


FAN SERVICE, IN THE BEST WAY:

One area in which I've generally been impressed by Star Trek: Picard is in its careful balance of fan service against being its own show. From the beginning, Picard has done a fine job of using nostalgia just enough to enhance without allowing it to overwhelm the story. There have certainly been occasions that I've found the stories themselves a bit lacking (Season Two), but the use of past elements has largely shown restraint and careful judgment.

I think that might be one reason why the final ten minutes of this episode works so well. For the first time, in the closing Act of its penultimate episode, Picard leans fully into fanservice. I watched Encounter at Farpoint back in 1987. I was one of the kids in the schoolyard dismissing TNG as "fake Star Trek" and "diet Star Trek," and I watched as it slowly transformed into a cultural touchstone in its own right. I have a hard time believing that too many fans of my generation weren't at least somewhat moved by this episode's closing minutes.

Yes, it's blatant fanservice. But as a fan, I felt well-served - and I think it lands just right because the series has been cautious in its reliance on fanservice elements up to this point. In short, by the time Picard finally goes full fanservice, it's earned the privilege.


OTHER MUSINGS:

"So how much of me is me?"
-Jack Crusher asks the season's key question. As of yet, it goes unanswered.

Questions of identity and inheritance have pervaded the season. Picard, Jack, and Beverly have all grappled with what traits Jack inherited. Picard keeps defaulting to seeing his worst traits in Jack: his stubbornness, his willfulness, more than a hint of his youthful arrogance. But Jack has also displayed courage, quick thinking, and even selflessness on multiple occasions - which is to say, some of Picard's best characteristics.

Throughout the season, the characters have talked about Jack almost as an extension of Picard, though. Riker marvels at the similarities he sees between them. Picard worries about the traits he's left the young man. Jack has worried about the same, from the Irumodic Syndrome to this episode's revelation of inherited Borg influence. At every turn, the characters seem to ignore what Geordi and Sidney acknowledged about each other back in The Bounty - that whatever was passed on, Jack, like Sidney, is also his own person.

Jack ends this episode by coming face to face with the Borg Queen (Alice Krige), who also sees him not as himself but rather as an extension of her will. I am hoping that the finale will actually come back to the thread of Jack's own identity, however, to answer the question quoted above: Beyond what he inherited from Picard, from Dr. Crusher, from the Borg, who is he? Given how much of the season has circled around that question, I'll feel a bit churlish if Jack as himself isn't important.

Beyond that, Võx is a solid episode. This is another installment that's mostly there to put the characters in place for the finale, so I suspect more detailed thoughts will wait until the finale. I will say that the nature of the Borg assimilation is rather clever. The mechanism is unique, but it also makes sense given the way the Borg have previously been shown to work.


OVERALL:

I have a few worries about the Borg revelation. Picard has spent the entire season building up the threat of a changeling infiltration. The bait and switch with the Borg has the potential to be interesting... but it also runs the risk of making the changelings, up until now the season's villains, into irrelevance.

I will hope that the finale manages to pull all the threads together.


Overall Rating: 7/10.

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Friday, December 13, 2024

3-04. No-Win Scenario.

Capt. Vadic receives her orders.
Capt. Vadic receives her orders.

Original Air Date: Mar. 9, 2023. Written by: Terry Matalas, Sean Tretta. Directed by: Jonathan Frakes.


THE PLOT:

The Titan is dead in space, sinking into the nebula and ever closer to its lethal "gravity well." The bridge crew desperately reroutes power to keep life support functional, but Riker knows that all they're doing is buying a few extra hours of life.

Picard uses that time to try to get to know Jack, if only just a little bit. Riker starts to compose a message to Deanna; but he can't find the words and leaves it unfinished. Meanwhile, Seven reluctantly turns to Capt. Shaw for help in tracking the changeling infiltrator - something they both know may not even matter as the ship keeps being rocked by the energy waves emitted from the center of the nebula.

In sick bay, Dr. Crusher notices a pattern in those waves - a pattern that just might give them a chance to escape!


CHARACTERS:

Picard: The episode has a tried-but-true frame device: Picard, at the bar Ten-Forward, is approached by eager young Starfleet recruits while sitting down to eat lunch. He's initially caught off guard at these young people turning to him for stories or advice, but he soon enjoys holding court as he shares his experiences and what they've taught him. A direct parallel to this is his attempt to bond with Jack, in a holodeck recreation of Ten-Forward, with him even sharing the same story of being caught in a (rather plot convenient) hopeless situation with the young man's namesake, Jack Crusher. When Jack asks about the name, Picard states that he would have selected the same name.

Riker: He chooses not to reinstate Seven because her current status puts her in a better position to quietly investigate the changeling. He emphasizes that the changeling's presence needs to be kept secret for the sake of the crew's already dwindling morale. The loss of his son hangs heavy on him. He recalls his son's burial, how immense the six feet into which the coffin was lowered seemed, and he urges Picard to spend the little time they have remaining getting to know Jack.

Seven of Nine: Being stripped of her rank leaves her free to show her disdain for Shaw - something he perversely responds quite well to. She doesn't like confiding in him, but he knows the ship and crew better than anyone else. His advice proves to be spot-on, and their interactions throughout the episode are enormously entertaining.

Dr. Crusher: She spends most of the episode as the designated "problem solver," counting the gaps between energy waves and figuring out the pattern. When Picard and Jack try to convince Riker of their plan, she ends up being the most persuasive voice, reminding him of the things they accomplished in the past by trusting each other.

Jack Crusher: He insists that he doesn't need to share time with Picard, but he goes along with it. He observes of the Ten-Forward holoprogram: "This fake place is as good as any to die in." For all his protests, he seems to genuinely enjoy listening to Picard describe his youthful misadventure with his namesake, and he becomes aggrieved when Capt. Shaw reminds them of Picard's past as "Locutus," with Picard having to stop Jack from responding. He and Picard work well together during the escape, with Picard trusting in Jack's instincts at a critical moment.

Ensign LaForge: Geordi's daughter, Sidney LaForge (Ashlei Sharpe Chestnut) is the Titan's helm officer. I haven't mentioned her before because she's mostly been in the background, but both character and actress have worked well all season. She gets a bit more screen time here, playing a major role in the ship's escape and also being an important (if unwitting) part of Seven's search for the changeling.

Capt. Shaw: After a very bad start, Shaw has slowly climbed the ranks of my favorite characters this season. His interactions with Seven are fun, and I love how openly amused he is by her labeling him "a dick." His best scene comes in Ten-Forward, however, when he interrupts Picard's nostalgic tales by telling the memory that haunts him the most - of being a survivor of Wolf 359. Shaw's story is well-written, and actor Todd Stashwick sells every bit of it as he stares off into space, seemingly reliving the events as he flatly narrates them.


THOUGHTS:

"No matter how bleak or unwinnable a situation, as long as you and your crew remain steadfast in your dedication, one to another, you are never, ever without hope."
-Picard, in happier times, holds court to a group of Starfleet cadets.

No-Win Scenario is the first episode of Picard that I would label as excellent with not a single qualifier. Its script is expertly judged, balancing great character scenes with major plot advancement. The cast rises to meet the writing quality with uniformly strong performances, including Patrick Stewart's best work so far this season.

There are no wasted scenes and no "spare" characters. Unanswered questions remain for the rest of the season, but there really isn't anything here that exists purely to set up the next installment. Everything that exists in this episode is used by this episode.

A major strength is that the script remains focused on the Titan. There are no cutaways to the Worf/Raffi subplot. Save for a couple brief scenes with Vadic, which are part and parcel of this story, we spend the entire episode on the damaged ship.

The first half is dedicated to character scenes. Picard is nostalgic and occasionally humorous as he recalls his misadventures to Jack. A funereal atmosphere hangs over their interactions, with both men aware that they are likely to die soon. Riker attempts to compose a message to Deanna, only to abandon it when he can't find the words. Both of these scenes are kept generally low-key, with both script and direction choosing just one character reflection - Shaw's memory of Wolf 359 - to go all-in on. It's a good choice, with the Wolf 359 scene the highest point in an episode filled with summits.

The latter half shifts to the escape, which is also well scripted. Every character gets something to do. Dr. Crusher makes the major observation that leads to the plan and persuades Riker. Jack suggests the general course of action. Picard and Riker direct the escape, while Ensign LaForge steers the ship. Meanwhile, Seven and Shaw work together, first in the changeling hunt and then in helping with the escape. It all ends up fitting together, the different threads strengthening each other rather than competing for attention.

If it stopped there, No-Win Scenario would already be an excellent episode. The tag scenes take it just a bit further. Picard's frame ends as he makes a sudden realization, with words from his past - which have been encouraging him all episode - suddenly returning to haunt him. Then Riker's message to Deanna gets completed in a way that's entirely satisfying, while also reminding us of the many open threads.

Oh, and one more strength of this episode, one that is promising for the rest of the season: It has a real ending! The big questions remain open. We don't know what the changelings are planning, or why they are interested in Jack, nor do we know Vadic's full role - active participant or mere hired gun. But instead of dragging the Titan/Shrike standoff across ten episodes, that situation ends, with the loose threads carrying over to whatever the next Act will be. This seems likely to avoid a repeat of Season Two's midseason pacing issues.


OVERALL:

No-Win Scenario is the best episode of Picard to date. Every character is utilized. Every scene advances either the characterizations or the plot. The ending even makes use of what seemed to be a simple frame device in a way that grants additional meaning.

The end result is the first Star Trek: Picard episode to earn full marks from me. My hopes are now raised that this final season will actually end up being a worthy sendoff.


Overall Rating: 10/10.

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Friday, November 22, 2024

3-01. The Next Generation.

Picard receives a message from Dr. Crusher.
Picard receives a message from an old friend.

Original Air Date: Feb. 16, 2023. Written by: Terry Matalas. Directed by: Doug Aarniokoski.


THE PLOT:

Just past the edge of Federation space, Dr. Beverly Crusher is hiding from an unknown enemy. Despite her best efforts, the enemy finds her. Before she has a chance to warp to a new area, her ship is boarded. She fends off the attack but is wounded in the process.

Desperate, she sends a coded message to Jean-Luc Picard. The retired admiral is preparing to accompany Laris, who has taken a job setting up diplomatic security on Chaltok IV. It will give him a chance to relax, drink wine, and begin his memoirs. But Beverly's message puts paid to those plans, with Laris telling him that he has to go. There's one additional complication - Beverly tells him to trust no one, including Starfleet.

Picard turns for help to Will Riker, his former first officer. Riker bluffs his way onto his old ship, the Titan, on the pretext of an inspection. Captain Liam Shaw (Todd Stashwick) is a believer in obeying rules, following orders, and doing things by the book. But Shaw's first officer is Seven of Nine, who is entirely willing to make sure Picard reaches his destination.

Meanwhile, Raffi is working with Stafleet Intelligence, tracking weapons that were stolen from the Daystrom Institute. She finds information connecting the theft to "the Red Lady," though her contact doesn't know whether that refers to a person or organization, or to a buyer or seller. The more Raffi looks into it, the grimmer the connection looks - particularly when she realizes just what "Red Lady" is being referred to...


CHARACTERS:

Picard: Is determinedly trying to "prove" that he learned his lesson from Q, but he's overcorrecting. He starts ordering mementos from his past boxed up and given away, and he loudly insists that he does not need "a legacy." He also isn't keeping up with current Starfleet protocols, which ends up biting him when he begins his mission. Seven catches him on this in a small way as the Titan leaves the dock, but this foreshadows a larger gaffe. When Riker is trying to persuade Capt. Shaw to take the ship off course, he seems well on the way to convincing the younger man - right up until Picard interjects by proposing a final inspection at a space station that's been out of service for more than a year. Seven tries to cover for him a second time, but the moment is lost and Shaw flatly refuses the request.

Riker: He seems to have hit a rocky patch in his marriage, telling Picard that he thinks Deanna will enjoy a break from his company. He doesn't elaborate, and Picard knows not to press. He makes cracks about his and Picard's age, but he seems as sharp as ever. When he's held at gunpoint, he only needs a second's distraction to turn the tables. He's mostly jokey with Picard. When Seven questions Picard, however, we see a flash of the "hard ass Riker" who was sometimes glimpsed in TNG. Jonathan Frakes is terrific throughout, and I suspect one of the pleasures of this season will be seeing him in a more active role.

Seven of Nine: Has finally joined Starfleet. She's already First Officer on the Titan; it's unspoken, but I suspect her years of experience on Voyager, her time with the Rangers, and her missions with Picard allowed her to leapfrog the ranks. She's not happy with her current situation, though, to the point that she doesn't much care when Capt. Shaw threatens her career. She hates serving under a captain whom she clearly doesn't respect and who doesn't seem to respect her, and she complains to Picard that things were simpler and clearer when she was a Ranger.

Raffi: Is off in subplot-land, working for Starfleet Intelligence to track down stolen weapons connected to someone or something known as "The Red Lady." Michelle Hurd does well with what she's given, and I have no doubt that this strand will eventually connect with the adventure Picard and Riker are on. Still, even with a surprise end turn, I found her scenes to be the least interesting part of this episode.

Dr. Crusher: She cut ties with everyone twenty years earlier, and she hasn't even spoken to her former shipmates since. We first see her behaving in a way that's very different than TNG's Beverly usually did, engaging in a firefight with enemies and not hesitating to use lethal force. When Picard and Riker find the signs of that fight, they remark on how unusual that is for her, though any answers as to what's actually going on are withheld for later episodes.

Laris: Senses that Picard is trying a bit too hard to embrace the present and ignore the past, and she does her best to keep him from giving away possessions that she knows are important to him. When she views Dr. Crusher's message, she gives her honest assessment as an ex-Intelligence officer: Crusher is genuinely and rationally afraid, and Picard has to help her. Though Picard insists that he'll only be gone for a few days, Laris doesn't believe him. She leaves open the possibility for otherwise, giving him a place where they can reconnect, but she treats their parting as a final goodbye.

Pompous Space Bureaucrat of the Season: Capt. Shaw (Todd Stashwick) fits this category to a "T." He prides himself on being perfectly by the book, to the point that he disdains Picard's and Riker's past exploits as "irresponsible." Apparently, he missed the part where he'd be either dead or a Borg drone without those past exploits. He takes pleasure in such petty acts as assigning them to bunk beds in cramped quarters or refusing to refer to Seven as anything other than "Hansen."


THOUGHTS:

"Your hands are stiff, and my knees are killing me. So long as we don't have to move or shoot, we should be fine."
-Riker, reflecting to Picard that both of them may be getting a bit old for these adventures.

Fan-pandering episode title aside, The Next Generation does a pretty good job of picking up from Picard's second season. Picard, Seven, and Raffi have all moved on in ways that make sense for where their characters were at the end of that season. Seven is in Starfleet; Raffi is working with Intelligence; and Picard is trying to embrace Q's lesson and focus on a future with Laris - though even Laris can see that he's pushing it.

As the first episode of a modern television season, The Next Generation is tasked with introducing the characters' current situations and setting up the season arc. It does a good job. The teaser establishes the threat, while still leaving a mystery as to the exact nature of this enemy. Picard, Riker, and Seven are placed on a ship whose captain is hostile to them. Raffi is established as investigating a weapons theft that leads her to something larger - and though that isn't linked to the main plot in this episode, I have no doubt that it will be.

Compared to the previous two Picard premieres, I think this is better than Remembrance, avoiding the rushed pacing that plagued that episode. The Picard/Riker material is a joy to watch, with Patrick Stewart and Jonathan Frakes falling right back into their old chemistry. Riker's wryness and downright eagerness to jump into a new adventure is a perfect balance for the more serious and reflective Picard.

I don't think it's as good as The Star Gazer was, however. Capt. Shaw is drawn in almost cartoonishly broad strokes. It would have been entirely possible to create a character who had sound arguments for refusing Picard and Riker. In my opinion, creating a good captain whose belief in the chain of command puts him in opposition to them would be much more interesting. Instead, we get a "pompous space bureaucrat" who seems designed to be hated, and who appears to have the respect of no one; his own bridge officers smirk when Seven violates his orders. If he sticks around, I hope the writers give him a bit more depth. At the moment, he seems likely to become unbearable.

The single worst thing about the episode is the lighting - or the lack thereof. In contrast to the first two seasons, many scenes are so dimly lit that it's difficult to make out backgrounds. Dr. Crusher dispatches her ambushers in dim lighting. Picard receives her message in his office, and I keep wondering why he doesn't switch a light on before he trips over something. Picard and Laris talk in front of his fireplace, and you can see so little of the room around them that they may as well be on a bare stage with spotlights. It's far from the worst example of this style that I've watched, and maybe I'm just getting old and grumpy... but when I watch something, I kind of like to be able to see it!


OVERALL:

The Next Generation is a decent start to the final season, establishing the characters' new situations and setting up the story. I'd be lying if I said I felt compelled at this point, but I enjoyed it well enough. I didn't love a few of the choices (such as Cartoon Capt. Jerk-face), but I'm at least interested to see where the story goes.


Overall Rating: 7/10.

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Thursday, December 14, 2023

2-02. Penance.

Q transports Picard to an alternate reality in which he's a bloodthirsty, xenophobic conqueror.
Q transports Picard to an alternate reality in which he's a bloodthirsty, xenophobic conqueror.

Original Air Date: Mar. 10, 2022. Teleplay by: Akiva Goldsman, Terry Matalas, Christopher Monfette. Story by: Michael Chabon, Akiva Goldsman, Terry Matalas, Christopher Monfette. Directed by: Douglas Aarniokoski.


THE PLOT:

After activating the self-destruct on The Star Gazer, Jean-Luc Picard is dead. Or at least, he should be.

Instead, he is back at Chateau Picard, and he has company: Q (John DeLancie), who portentously announces that Picard is at "the very end of the road not taken." Q shows him around the chateau as it is now. Picard has robotic servants. The work is still being done by displaced Romulans - slaves taken during the human conquest of Romulus. "General Picard" has a trophy room with the skulls of his enemies, including Gul Dukat, Martok, and Sarek.

It is an alternate reality, one in which the Earth is governed by the warlike and xenophobic "Confederation." Q has transferred all of Picard's crew to this new reality. Seven is Earth's President; Raffi, a security chief; Elnor, a dissident; Rios, a starship captain; and Jurati... well, she's pretty much herself - save, as she notes, for an upgrade in torture devices.

Today is Eradication Day, a holiday celebrating humanity's supremacy through the execution of "dissidents, alien sympathizers, (and) terrorists." Among the condemned is a Borg Queen (Annie Wersching), who is able to sense the changes to the timeline. Under questioning, the queen reveals that this reality resulted from a single change to the past. Picard and company will need to go back in time to set things right - but first they will need to escape the watchful eyes of the Confederation!


CHARACTERS:

Picard: Q gives him a head start in grasping the type of reality he's now in, but he still gathers his composure and plays the part of his Fascist Universe Counterpart faster than any of the others manages. Then again, he has a bit of experience at finding himself suddenly living an unfamiliar life. He shows his leadership qualities as soon as he starts meeting the others, improvising quickly but authoritatively to keep Raffi and Elnor out of trouble, then focusing the group on what needs to be done to return to their own timeline.

Seven of Nine: When she wakes up in the Presidential bedroom without her Borg implants, she runs a series of quick sensory tests to make sure that what she's experiencing is real. She tests pain by burning herself, but the most convincing result is smell: "You can't smell in a dream." She recoils at the sight of the Borg Queen. When it becomes clear that they will need the Queen to help them, she is brutal in confronting her, almost gloating at the "pitiful end to the Great Borg Empire."

Dr. Jurati: Though her circumstances are the least changed, she does the worst job of fitting in. The way she stammers and babbles... Well, let's just say that if the Confederation Magistrate didn't already suspect something was "off," then he certainly did after meeting Jurati. She's more effective when actually working a scientific problem, taking down Confederation defenses so that Rios can beam them all safely away. Even then, she can't quite resist having what feels a lot like a marital dispute mid-crisis: "I would hang up on you right now if it wasn't going to get us all killed."

Raffi/Elnor: They make an entertaining duo, with Raffi playing the part of Elnor's captor. Her story about exactly what intelligence she's hoping to extract keeps changing just a little with each new guard she speaks to. At one point, she uses him as a distraction, allowing a couple of guards to beat him while she accesses their security - only to tell him, "Elnor, they're yours," once she has what she needs, at which point he takes great pleasure in demonstrating his martial skills.

Pompous Earth Bureaucrat of the Week: Jon Jon Briones, father of Sonji actress Isa Briones, is the Magistrate - Seven's husband in this reality. The marriage doesn't appear to be overly burdened by love or affection, and the "dear" he punctuates his sentences with sounds more artificial than anything the androids in the show have ever said. He's a weasel, and it isn't hard for either Seven or Picard to bully him into granting them privacy. That said, he does not appear to be stupid, and his facial expressions show that he senses something not quite right about his wife by the end of their first scene together.

Borg Queen: I'll allow that there are still a few Voyager Borg episodes that I haven't seen. Even so, this is the first time I can recall seeing a Borg Queen in a position of helplessness. Her people have been eradicated, leaving her isolated and alone - and as Seven's early Voyager appearances showed, "alone" isn't something Borg manage well. She is able to sense the timeline disturbances, however, recognizing Seven both as Borg and not and Picard as both "Locutus" and not.

Q: Picard wonders if he's unstable. To me, it looks like he's suppressing rage. He talks about how this world is a result of Picard and/or humanity's own choices. "Show them a world of their own making, and they ask what you've done." Picard, confronted with his counterpart's slaves, protests, "I would never" - and Q cuts him off, sneering at these words as "the luxury of the victors" before taking glee in showing off the alternate Picard's collection of gruesome trophies: the skulls of such adversaries as Martok, Sarek, and Gul Dukat. I bet Sisko wouldn't have minded adorning his office with the last of those...


THOUGHTS:

"You're welcome to remain here, in the body of a madman, in the world of a madman - to attempt, like Macbeth, to wash the blood from your hands. But I assure you, Jean-Luc, it's un-washable."
-Q demands penance from Picard.

After The Star Gazer set up the characters' new places, both professionally and emotionally, it falls to this episode to kick-start the plot. An alternate reality/time travel plot - which makes me a bit nervous. Alternate reality and time travel shenanigans can be fun, and Star Trek has delivered some corkers in both areas. But a full season? I worry that it will get... old.

My reservations about the season aside, Penance does its job well. This is an efficient script. The Picard/Q scene sets up the new universe while at the same time giving both Patrick Stewart and John DeLancie to show that time has not diminished their screen rapport. The next Act establishes the new existences of each of the crew. Then the meat of the episode centers around them having to keep up appearances while finding a way to escape from Eradication Day (which really should have been the title of the episode).


AN UNCREATIVE TIMELINE:

My biggest gripe is that the alternate timeline isn't particularly interesting.

Star Trek has shown plenty of alternate realities before, often with memorable results. Mirror, Mirror was a "pure evil" timeline, but there was still a sense of character relationships and power dynamics, and enough of a sense of a society for future books and spinoff series to revel in. Yesterday's Enterprise presented a changed reality in which all the regulars were recognizably themselves, but were altered by living in a militaristic environment.

Penance presents... "The Fascist Future." And there's really nothing more to it than that. The only thing I could truly tell you about this society is that its xenophobic. There aren't even any memorable guest characters. Seven's husband is the only one whose screen time goes beyond "walk-on," and he's pretty much your standard issue weasel. Aside from Picard himself, I had little sense of how the regulars' alternate timeline personalities differed from their regular ones. Never mind the actual alternate timelines I mentioned above: This episode's society feels less lived in than the deliberately over-the-top "fake history" of Voyager's Living Witness!

None of this makes the episode bad. It's well structured, it moves quickly, and it's never less than entertaining. I just wish its alternate reality had a bit more to it.


OVERALL:

Despite the generic setting, Penance does what it needs to do. It sets up the season arc while at the same time giving the characters an episode-specific situation to overcome. It even ends on a pretty decent cliffhanger.

I am worried that the overarching story seems to be focused on time travel and alternate universes, as such stories are usually best reserved for one or two-parters. On its own terms, though, Penance is... well, it's much like Picard itself. It was good, and I enjoyed it - but I couldn't help but feeling that with a bit more creativity, it could have been better.


Overall Rating: 7/10.

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Friday, December 8, 2023

2-01. The Star Gazer.

Picard delivers an impassioned speech to a class of Starfleet Academy graduates.
Picard delivers an impassioned speech to a class of Starfleet Academy graduates.

Original Air Date: Mar. 3, 2022. Written by: Akiva Goldsman, Terry Matalas. Directed by: Douglas Aarniokoski.


THE PLOT:

Picard is back in Starfleet. He is chancellor of the Academy, focusing his energies on the next generation of explorers. The ragtag La Sirena crew members have gone their own ways. Seven is still a Fenris Ranger. Soji is acting as an ambassador for the synthetics. Raffi has taken command of the USS Excelsior, and the recently-graduated Elnor is among her crew.

Capt. Rios is also in Starfleet again, in charge of the USS Star Gazer. Named after Picard's first command, this starship is the prototype for a new class that uses research from the Borg artifact. The Star Gazer is orbiting Delta, where Soji is impressing the local populace, when Rios receives new orders. A tear in space-time has been detected, and he's been ordered to investigate.

The anomaly is emitting a transmission, one which Dr. Jurati is able to decipher. It is a plea:

"Help us, Picard. Help us..."


CHARACTERS:

Picard: No longer the bitter old hermit of early Season One, Picard seems to be enjoying his return to Starfleet. He has purpose again. When he speaks at a graduating class, it is with passion and joy. Despite this, his personal life continues to be barren, something commented on at various points by Raffi, by Romulan ex-spy/housekeeper Laris, and by Guinan. Laris directly expresses interest in him, and he seems to reciprocate... but for whatever reason, he cannot quite make himself close that gap.

Capt. Rios: He's generally informal as he splays in the captain's chair, perpetually chomping on a cigar. This default demeanor makes it all the more effective when he is sharply in crisis mode near the end. When Picard arrives on the Star Gazer, he defers to him without a word of complaint. He remains alert, however, ready to step in to protect Picard or to take over for him.

Seven of Nine: Has taken command of La Sirena, Rios's old ship. She has not hired a crew, preferring to rely on the Rios holograms. She tells Picard that others feel paranoid about the presence of an ex-Borg. Though she seems reluctant to interact with others, she still insists on helping others - though being Seven, her way of helping tends to involve violence.

Dr. Jurati: Broke up with Rios in the gap between seasons, yet she continues to work with him. They still "read" as a couple, with a distinct flirtatious undertone to their interactions. She continues to carry scars from the events of Season One. When she figures out that a Deltan is interested in her - "This is how really pretty people flirt, isn't it?" - she shoots him down by talking about how alien influence resulted in her murdering her previous ex.

Soji: Is only seen briefly, apparently to write her out. She is confident and charming in her diplomatic relations on Delta. She also retains her friendship with Jurati, which makes me disappointed that this one scene is probably the character's full role for the season. Their friendship is both entertaining and convincing, and I suspect I will miss it in future episodes.

Raffi: She's made sure that Elnor is assigned to her ship, feeling protective of the young man whose "absolute candor can get his ass kicked." Her relationship with Seven is in a holding pattern, and she wishes that there could be something more... which would be a lot easier to care about if their relationship had gotten any build-up at all. As of now, I still can't judge them as a couple, because they've barely exchanged two words in the entire series to date!

Laris: Her husband died between seasons of a terminal case of "Orla Brady has screen chemistry with Patrick Stewart." After Picard fails to act on her overtures, she rejects the suggestion that they continue as they have been. "It would all be too awkward, and I'm too old for awkward." Either they're a couple, or she'll move on.

Guinan: Whoopi Goldberg appears in one very good scene in her old TNG role. Guinan is still a bartender, and she is still ready to serve Picard a drink and listen. She tries to get him to open up about why he has never had a lasting relationship, waving away his attempts to talk about space exploration and Starfleet. But when it becomes clear that he isn't willing to talk more openly, she agrees to just share a quiet drink with him.


THOUGHTS:

"The only place you have ever been afraid to explore, be it flesh and blood or an artificial synthetic, is (the heart)... Your answers are not in the stars, and they never have been."
-Guinan, refusing to accept Picard's reasons for remaining alone.

As a season premiere, The Star Gazer has the confidence to take its time. The episode touches base with the characters and just lets them chat: Picard and Laris exchanging toasts in multiple languages; Jurati and Soji, more relaxed than we've ever seen them as they joke with each other at a diplomatic event; Jurati and Rios, interacting like an old married couple despite their breakup; Picard sharing a drink with Guinan even as he studiously avoids saying anything meaningful. The script centers itself on the characters, only pivoting to a plot focus in the last fifteen minutes.

The writers are clearly setting up a season theme for Picard involving his avoidance of relationships. Multiple characters comment on this. Raffi remarks that she wonders if Picard even gets lonely, and the way Patrick Stewart's posture changes for just a second is all the answer the viewers require. In this one way, he is still - to paraphrase his own words in Season One - not actually living.

I'm not sure as yet how this strand will connect to the external threat introduced at the end, though too much time is given to it for there not be some type of connection. Within this opening hour, I was mainly just pleased to see that the episode didn't try to rush. By putting the characters first, there is more investment when the action finally comes at the end.

I had only one major disappointment with an otherwise highly enjoyable opener. Season One ended with Picard's consciousness transferred into a synthetic body. Even with Dr. Soong's assurances that this body remained his - human and mortal, just minus his illness - I felt that Picard's acceptance of the situation was a cheat. A character-focused Season Two opener provided an opportunity for him to demonstrate discomfort, however private or buried. Instead, the only mention it receives is a quick throwaway line by Guinan. Yes, I thought it was a bad story move - but it happened, so the show really should engage with it.

The opening credits have been retooled, presumably to fit the story and themes of this season. The theme is still recognizable, but it has a darker tone. The visuals now include: the piece of painted glass that Picard looks at early in the episode; the enemy introduced at the end; and the image of an hourglass.

The production team appears to have learned its lesson about billing for surprise guest stars. Whoopi Goldberg receives a credit on the front, but another guest appearance is reserved for the end credits to preserve the surprise. Admittedly, that surprise was spoiled by basically every trailer and write-up for Season Two - but at least the show is no longer spoiling itself!


OVERALL:

The Star Gazer is a strong opening to Picard's second season. The character focus is welcome, and all of the actors continue to do good work. I'm not sure yet exactly where the season arc is going, or how the external threat will tie into the personal arc being set up for Picard. Based on this opening, though, I look forward to finding out.


Overall Rating: 8/10.

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