3-08. Surrender

Data faces oblivion at the hands of his evil "brother," Lore.

Original Air Date: Apr. 6, 2023. Written by: Matt Okumura. Directed by: Deborah Kampmeier.


THE PLOT:

The Titan is now under the control of Capt. Vadic and the changelings. She immediately uses that control to cut off the Starfleet crew members' access to sensors and communications - which, as she observes, deprives them of both their eyes and their ears. She has a single demand: That Jack Crusher turn himself over to her. If he does not, then she will execute one member of the bridge crew every ten minutes, a threat she is positively giddy about enforcing.

There is only one way to wrest control back: Data, who remains locked in a battle for control against his brother, Lore. Only the partition between personalities is keeping Lore at bay. With no other options, Geordi reluctantly agrees to remove the partition. The hope is that Data will find the strength to prevail.

It quickly becomes apparent that the plan is failing. Lore begins taking Data's memories away, one by one. "I'm overpowering you, brother, as I always could. One lifeform replacing another. Evolution." And faced with his own extinction, Data doesn't even seem to be fighting back...


CHARACTERS:

Picard: Jack's instinct is to turn himself in, hoping that Vadic will spare the crew if she gets what she wants. Picard's conversation with her has left him knowing the exact opposite: That Vadic's hatred of solids is so all-consuming that once she has Jack, she is certain to kill everybody. He has a father's instinct to protect his newfound son; but as a commander, he understands that Jack can buy time for Data, and that ends up winning out.

Riker: Reunited with Deanna, Riker reveals one of the major reasons that he left: Deanna used her telepathic abilities to dampen his grief over his son. "Our son died, Deanna, and I needed to feel the grief! ...It was my last connection to him, and you tried to erase it." I like the way this is played. By this point, Riker has had the chance to deal with his own emotions. There's less overt anger in his voice and more a sense of lingering disappointment. He also listens to her point of view and reconciles with her fairly quickly.

Deanna: Her actions were in part motivated by self-defense. Riker was numbed by his own grief. Deanna was stuck feeling her grief, his grief, and their daughter's, all at the same time. Readers of my TNG reviews know that I wasn't the biggest fan of Deanna Troi - but Marina Sirtis is extremely good here. It helps that the script gives Deanna a sense of humor that was too often missing from TNG, particularly when she laments their house on Nepenthe: "We went there for Thad, but it's not really my cup of tea... That house, it's like it was designed by a cabal of retro prairie hipsters."

Seven of Nine: Everything about who she is makes it impossible for her to just stand by while Vadic prepares to execute crew members, but everything about the situation makes it impossible for her to actually do anything. She tries to direct Vadic's attention toward her instead of the crew - an effort doomed to failure, since it allows Vadic to be cruel to her as well as the bridge officers, all while demonstrating her own total control. Once the balance of power changes, Seven responds with a very Janeway-like ferocity.

Data/Lore: The episode's best moments belong to Brent Spiner in his familiar dual role. After Geordi lifts the partition, Lore is free to directly attack Data's very existence. He describes Data's memories as "meaningless memorabilia," while expressing resentment that he was abandoned while Data was showered with friendship, recognition, and respect. In the face of Lore's viciousness, Data seems to surrender and accept the inevitable - though I don't think it's a spoiler to say that there's more to it than that. The scenes between the two brothers are smartly written, with not only cleverness but some real emotional weight, and it's all wonderfully played by Spiner.

Jack Crusher: As he confessed last episode, he feels responsible for Riker's capture, and he does not want to be responsible for crew deaths. He attempts to use his newfound abilities to break Vadic's control by taking control of a bridge crew member to enter Picard's access code. The attempt fails, of course, or else this episode would be only about twenty minutes long, but it still shows Jack's resourcefulness. He wants to know what's happening to him and what that red door in his visions means. However, he admits to Troi that he's also terrified by what he might find.

Capt. Shaw: He and Seven are paired throughout the episode - again - and he comes across as the latest (and easily most cynical) of her series of mentors. This episode sees him continuing his season-long role of saying true things that the other characters don't want to hear. He's absolutely right when he tells Seven that she should have blown the turbolift when he and Vadic were inside it. When she protests that she's not willing to trade lives, he scoffs: "You are a Starfleet officer. You don't have the luxury to only make choices that feel hunky-dory."

Capt. Vadic: With Vadic in full control, actress Amanda Plummer gets to properly chew some scenery. Vadic is practically a child at play as she takes the bridge. She waves her hands in a ghastly mimic of an orchestra conductor as she pipes in the sounds of the crew screaming. She treats her execution threat as a game, demanding names and then personal details from her potential victims before finding a way to inflict as much cruelty as she can to as many people as possible in a single action. Bizarrely, though, when she's face-to-face with Jack, she seems genuine in saying that she wants to help him... though I'm quite certain that her definition of "help" is something no sane person would want. Oh, and her final line is particularly memorable.


THOUGHTS:

The previous episode was mostly setup, maneuvering the characters into position. Well, Surrender pays it off with a tense and well-paced hour of television.

This is structured around a time-honored TV format: The hostage episode. Vadic has control of the ship, holding the bridge crew literally at gunpoint. A nice variation on the usual setup, though, is that there's no negotiation. Vadic despises solids and has no interest in talking to them. She announces to the ship that she wants Jack, and she announces that she'll kill crew members every ten minutes until she gets him - all one-way communication. The only response that can be given is for Jack to appear in the turbolift.

Amanda Plummer is terrific here. Vadic has fully embraced her mania, reveling in her own sadism, but she's still calculating. She attacks Jack's conscience by making the hostages reveal personal details, pushing Jack into turning himself in. Then, once Jack comes to her, she's suddenly sincere, and it doesn't come across as an act. A weak performance would make all of this feel fractured, but Plummer keeps it unified. Vadic is as smart as she is damaged, a one-time victim who has become a monster.

As good as Plummer is, Brent Spiner is even better. At his worst, Spiner has sometimes leaned into ham. That doesn't happen here. Lore may sneer archly, but - much like Vadic - script and performer show us the emotional pain at his core. TNG viewers understand that Lore was deactivated because he became dangerous. To Lore, however, he was rejected in favor of an inferior clone, one who was more obviously robotic than him. Meanwhile, Data just accepts Lore's anger, something that seems meek until the final pieces fall into place. Spiner gives us, to all intents, three different performances within the episode, keeping all three variations distinct and at the same time related to each other. It's impressive work that I would rank among his best in the franchise.

Matt Okumura's script is very good at tying both threads together. There are the obvious plot links: Vadic's control of the ship prompts Picard and Geordi to risk lowering the partition between Data and Lore. There is also the thematic link, that Vadic and Lore are both motivated by resentment against those they believe wronged them. There's even an echo of this in the Riker/Deanna scenes, with Riker having been legitimately wronged by his wife. Unlike Lore and Vadic, however, Riker listens to Deanna's explanation and forgives, making their interactions a healthier counterpoint to the villains.

As was true of No-Win Situation, this episode offers viewers a proper ending. The situation set up last episode, that dominates this episode, is resolved. The ending teases what's coming in the final two installments - but this scenario is closed out in a way that is (again) entirely satisfying. The willingness of Season Three to resolve its threads is one of the biggest ways in which I think this season has improved on Season Two.


OVERALL:

Surrender juggles multiple threads while still finding something for every member of the cast to do. It's tense, it moves along nicely, and it even offers some strong emotional scenes in the exchanges between Data and Lore. Overall, this stands as a strong episode in a very strong season.


Overall Rating: 9/10.

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3-07. Dominion.

Capt. Vadic is lured onto the Titan.

Original Air Date: Mar. 30, 2023. Written by: Jane Maggs. Directed by: Deborah Kampmeier.


THE PLOT:

The Titan crew are now aware that the target of the Daystrom theft was Picard's original dead body. Given that Picard was meant to be a part of the upcoming Frontier Day celebration, they determine that the event must be at the center of the changelings' plan - giving the team only 36 hours to stop them.

With little time and few options, Picard decides to set a trap. He allows Capt. Vadic to find the Titan, which is made to appear dead in space. When Vadic and a boarding party come aboard, they use force fields to separate their enemies, with Picard and Dr. Crusher taking the opportunity to stage an interrogation.

The plan works perfectly, save for an unexpected wild card: Data. Retrieving the "new" Data from Daystrom allowed Picard to figure out the changelings' plan. But Data's consciousness is sharing space with his evil brother, Lore. Data and Lore are vying for control of the android body - and at the moment, Lore is winning!


CHARACTERS:

Picard: When Jack goes to him to tell him about hearing other people's thoughts, he struggles with conveying the information. Picard waits patiently until the young man has a chance to coherently explain. He does not dismiss the concerns as a hallucination, even though the medical diagnosis of the previous episode would allow for that doubt. Instead, the information leads him to concocting a plan to more or less do what he kept pushing Riker to do in Seventeen Seconds: Lure Vadic into a trap so that they can take the fight to her.

Seven of Nine: In an attempt to find allies, she reaches out to an old friend: Tuvok. This results in an excellent scene as the two warily probe each other. Seven can't be certain if this truly is Tuvok or a changeling imposter. Meanwhile, Tuvok is either a changeling trying to trap her or a loyal Starfleet officer who has been told that her ship is a rogue vessel. The result is that each seems genuinely happy to see the other, and yet at the same time each is unable to fully trust the other.

Data/Lore: The first episode of TNG to feature Lore was titled, Datalore - which would be a reasonably accurate description of the current android. Before he died, Dr. Alton Soong was attempting to integrate both personalities into a single being, work that his death left unfinished. As a result, "Data" and "Lore" are conscious within the android body, warring for control. An early scene features Data attempting to provide assistance to Picard, while Lore repeatedly interrupts to sneer archly. At one point, Data cries out to Picard for help. Brent Spiner is excellent, swapping seamlessly from one personality to another within the same take.

Geordi: He is hesitant to try to "save" Data by erasing Lore, pointing out the complexities of this new android brain. "This is more art than engineering."  A nudge from Picard is enough for him to agree to plug Data into the ship's systems for analysis - and is it even a spoiler to reveal that Lore takes advantage of this at the worst possible moment? As predictable as this plot turn is, it does allow LeVar Burton to do some fine acting as he pleads with Data to fight back against Lore, reminding him of their long friendship.

Jack Crusher: Gains a new ability: telepathy. This manifests when he's awkwardly fliting with Sidney LaForge in the turbolift. She responds hesitantly, and he picks up thoughts that show that she's interested but wishes that he would do something more subtle, like brushing her hand... which he proceeds to do, creeping her out immediately. He has the sense to go straight to Picard, and in his stammering attempt to explain himself, he also reveals that he feels responsible for Riker's capture.

Capt. Vadic: The centerpiece of the episode is an extended conversation between her, Picard, and Dr. Crusher. She is all too happy to share exactly what happened to her during the Dominion War and why she bears such malice toward Starfleet and toward solids in general. She's no less a villain at the end of the scene. As Picard observes, knowing her background actually confirms that there's no chance of finding a peaceful solution. But we now understand what drives her, and Amanda Plummer is excellent as she conveys the depths of Vadic's pain and hatred.


THOUGHTS:

"How remarkable it is that an enlightened species can ignore each other's pain... The Federation took my family. Now I will take yours."
-Vadic reveals the depth of her hatred for solids in conversation with Picard.

Vadic insists that Starfleet/Section 31 devising a bio-weapon was unconscionable, and I'd be willing to acknowledge that it was morally wrong. But she then declares that the Dominion was merely engaged in standard warfare... which any Deep Space 9 viewer knows is not the truth. From swearing genocide against the Cardassians, to debating the destruction of Earth as a demonstration of power, to unleashing a virus against a civilian population, that series showed numerous examples of the changelings engaged in what would easily qualify as war crimes.

This isn't a criticism of the scene, which is superb. Vadic tells herself what she wishes to believe: That her side was good and that her enemies were the real monsters. But I think it's more a demonstration of the cycle of violence. The Dominion attacks, unleashing devastation; Section 31 infects the changelings with a genocidal virus; and now the survivors of that virus seek their own revenge. Per the iconic Gandhi quote: "An eye for an eye makes the whole world blind."

Outside of that scene, the rest of the episode is... fine. I was not as gripped by the Data/Lore struggle as the episode wanted me to be, or indeed as gripped as I think I should have been. Perhaps it's just that TNG covered this kind of ground with Lore and Data multiple times during its run, or perhaps it's that other threads had more of my interest than this one did. I wasn't bored or irritated by the Data scenes - but I found myself wanting to return to Picard and Vadic.

I'm withholding judgment on the Jack developments. A part of me wonders if it's a good idea to give your hitherto relatable new character superpowers, particularly in a show starring Patrick Stewart. But at least this episode manages to deliver a pretty good action scene. Also, the characters are thus far responding as they should: by being freaked out. In the end, how I feel about this thread will depend very much on where it ends up going and how it's ultimately dealt with.


OVERALL:

In a season that has mostly avoided pure "connector" episodes, Dominion seems to mainly serve this function. There are good scenes, but the episode doesn't have much of a story of its own. Instead, it serves to move the characters into position for the next installment. As is likely apparent by now, I find these to be the hardest types of episodes to review, both because they lack much identity in their own right and because their ultimate success is dependent on what comes next.

Dominion does benefit from the excellent scene between Picard, Vadic, and Dr. Crusher. Their conversation uses the Dominion War backstory to strong effect while convincingly presenting all three characters. By the end, Picard is able to recognize two critical things: Vadic is a victim of the war in her own right; and her hatred is such that there is zero chance of reasoning with her.

That scene elevates my ranking of this episode by a full point. But I hope with only three installments left, none of the remaining ones will exist just to set up the next bit.


Overall Rating: 7/10.

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Thoughts on Season One.

Admiral Jean-Luc Picard (retired) uncovers a conspiracy...

Star Trek: Picard was a highly awaited show. Boasting the return of Patrick Stewart to an iconic role, and with award winning writer Michael Chabon in charge of the story, the series promised much. Pre-release promotion indicated that the series would offer storytelling that was intelligent and adult, while still providing plenty of fast-paced action for genre fans.  Basically, Picard would satisfy old-school fans and new ones alike.

That was probably always going to be a tough promise to live up to, so it's little surprise that the results were a bit... mixed.


"NO LONGER STARFLEET":

Though the series' premiere suffers from uneven pacing, there is much promise in the initial episodes. Science fiction generally is written as a reflection of modern society.  That's very much the case here; released in a divided time in which many feel pessimistic about the future, Picard presents a decaying Federation that is moving in the wrong direction.

The series opens with a sense of disillusionment. Picard has renounced Starfleet, condemning them for turning their back on their own ideals. "They were no longer Starfleet," he angrily proclaims during an interview. When he later goes to a Starfleet admiral for help, she throws that interview back in his face and tells him that Starfleet "is no longer your house," all but dismissing his concerns as the fantasies of a senile old man.

The first half of the series follows up on this. Absolute Candor shows us the Romulan refugees left to fend for themselves after Starfleet decided not to continue lending aid to their one-time enemies. The contrast between the hopeful refugees shown in an opening flashback and the bitter, angry ones seen in the present brings home the consequences of this. Even Stardust City Rag - the season's most standalone episode - reintroduces a Seven of Nine who has joined a vigilante outfit to try to keep some semblance of order in territories that Starfleet abandoned.

Romulan refugee Ellnor resents Picard for abandoning him.

A DROPPED THREAD:

This is an interesting thread, even just as a background to the main action. Unfortunately, it's all but completely dropped midway through the season.

The second half of the season barely references the changes in Starfleet since the TNG era. Only Broken Pieces remembers it, and then only long enough to tie up some plot issues. Other than that, this might as well be the Starfleet of the 1990s series. In that same episode, the previously dismissive Admiral Clancy promises Picard her support, and neither Picard nor his crew ever seem in any doubt of it. The finale then sees Starfleet represented by the friendly face of William Riker... which oddly echoes Star Trek: Insurrection, in which Riker also secured a reversal of a prior Starfleet decision entirely off screen.

I would have preferred the series to have kept alive the idea of a Starfleet that Picard couldn't necessarily count on. As much fun as Riker's cameo in the finale was, it might have been more interesting if Starfleet had arrived at the android planet with the same goal as the Romulan fleet: to try to curtail a threat. Then Picard could have been left trying to negotiate with three potentially hostile parties: the androids, the Romulans, and Starfleet. That might not have left much time for climactic action scenes... but it would have been more of a piece with the start of the season.

Picard visits old colleagues Will and Deanna Riker.

AN EFFECTIVE BALANCE OF STORYTELLING AND NOSTALGIA:

The greatest strength of Star Trek: Picard's first season is in how well it manages to feed nostalgia for the TNG era while still retaining its own identity as a very different series.

The series' opening scene features Picard playing poker with Data on the Enterprise - spiritually picking up exactly where the final scene of TNG's finale left off. It quickly becomes apparent that this is a dream sequence, and Picard is left waking up to his current life and situation, which is very different than his days as a starship captain.

The next several episodes focus on furthering the season's story and on introducing the new characters. These characters work well for the most part. Santiago Cabrera's Capt. Rios emerges as the standout; but all of the new regulars are well-played, and every character gets at least a few good moments throughout the season.

Even as Picard develops its new cast, it continues to drip-feed nostalgia from 1990s Trek. Episode Two references Picard's former crew members and explains why he won't just turn to them for help. Episode Four ends with the return of Seven of Nine, arguably the most popular character from 1990s Trek series Voyager. Episode Seven, Nepenthe, plays the most directly to TNG nostalgia, with Picard visiting old colleagues Riker and Troi and spending an entire episode as their houseguest.

This last should be a complete momentum killer, an episode-long wallow in nostalgia. However, the script makes it work. Not so much in the cutaways to Rios and the other crew members, whose scenes mostly feel like an intrusion - but in the primary material, with Picard, Soji, and the Rikers. Though these scenes have a pleasantly relaxed atmosphere, the focus remains on Picard's efforts to gain the trust of the traumatized android Soji. By putting story and much character emphasis on Soji's trauma and her wariness of Picard, the episode manages to balance the demands of being the fan-pleasing "Riker/Troi episode" against those of being a part of this series.

Picard has a conversation with Data that sums up the season's themes...
just in time for the rest of the episode to undermine it.

THE ENDING (YES, SPOILERS IF YOU HAVEN'T SEEN IT):

While Picard's finale was far from perfect (Example: Seven's plotline ends with her having a catfight against a character she never previously met, in order to avenge a character with whom she never shared a second of screen time), it was satisfying overall, particularly with regard to Picard's character journey. The man who had started the season as a bitter shell of his former self ends it making an impassioned plea about the responsibilities of being alive. He does this fully expecting it to be his last act, and it is a fine ending to his season journey. Had this been Picard's end, it would have been a substantially more fitting than the one Kirk received.

Then the last 10 - 15 minutes wrecks it by transferring Picard's brain into an android body.

It's not that there isn't dramatic potential in this. Earlier in the season, we see again the scars of Picard's assimilation by the Borg. He almost collapses when he beams onto The Artifact, the dormant Borg Cube claimed by the Romulans. He admits to Seven that he's never felt 100% human again after his experience of being Locutus of Borg.

In short, this should be Picard's greatest horror come to life: He is now something not quite human. Entirely without his consent, he has been "assimilated" by Dr. Soong. And there might be potential in that, except... the ending downplays this entirely. It's spelled out in painful detail that Picard is entirely unchanged. He's exactly as he would have been, with exactly the remaining life span he would have had, minus the terminal disease that's been hanging over him all season. And Picard is entirely OK with it, voicing not even a single reservation.

The whole thing feels like a cheat. Not only does it cheapen the sacrifice Picard was willing to make; it undermines the sentiments Data made just one scene earlier, in which he notes that the value of life is that it ends and that "a butterfly that lives forever is really not a butterfly at all." The entire structure of the season was that this was Picard's last adventure, and he explicitly states that he's giving his life to Soji and her people. By reversing that sacrifice so clumsily, it undermines much of what went before.

Narek manipulates Soji in the season's best episode.

THE CURSE OF A TEN-PART MOVIE:

To an extent, many of my issues with the season have to do with the structue of most modern series, particularly those made for streaming. Star Trek: Picard is less a television series than it is an elongated movie. Like a movie, most of its efforts go to furthering its central plot - one main plot that covers the entire season.

There are a couple breaks from this. Absolute Candor focuses on the displaced Romulans. Stardust City Rag comes close to being a standalone, centered around a sting against a dangerous criminal. But those are the only two exceptions. The rest of the season is centered around Picard's efforts to save Soji (and later, her people) from the Romulans.

I recognize that this kind of long-form storytelling is one of the advantages television has over movies. Stories can cover more ground, involve more characters, and deal with more complexity than can be fit into a 2-hour movie. At times, Star Trek: Picard makes this work. The Impossible Box, in which the various threads finally come together, is an excellent episode, easily the season's best, and its success comes in large part from it being able to pay off what was set up by previous installments.

However, I worry that the focus on long-form storytelling has led to neglect of television's other advantage: Its ability to pause and tell stories that are intimate, personal, and even small. This is far from a fault unique to Picard - but when everything is focused on showing some large-scale epic, then there isn't time for people sitting in a room talking, working through a conflict or a moral quandary in a quiet, contemplative manner.

I enjoyed (most of) Picard. But I didn't award a single "10," and I can't help but wonder if part of the reason is that everything had to fuel the plot. I think back on some of my favorite past Star Trek episodes, and so many of them are unimaginable in the framework Picard has employed. I can't imagine this series ever having room for episodes such as: Tapestry, The Inner Light, Duet, The Visitor, It's Only a Paper Moon, or Mortal Coil.

Again, that's more a comment on the trend of shows in general - but if there's no longer room for small, quiet storytelling gems, then I'd argue that more has been lost than has been gained.

Picard, back in command.

SEASON TWO WISHLIST:

Given that Q was in every promo for Season Two, I'm not going to feign total ignorance of what's to come. I know that Q will return, and I know that the next season will deal with some alternate universe shenanigans. I've managed to remain unspoiled beyond that.

My biggest hope is that they take what I felt was a disastrous ending and turn it into an asset.  I do not want to see it overwritten - Please no "Q handwaves it away" solution.  Instead, make use of it.  I still feel that Picard should be greatly troubled by what was done to him.  Take as a starting point that Picard, who has stated that the Borg left him feeling less than fully human, now actually is other than 100% human.  I don't like that it was done; but since that route was taken, I hope they follow it and make something interesting out of it.

I also hope that they continue to make good use of the regulars they have established. I actually quite like Picard's cast. Even the underused characters have potential, and all of the actors are at least competent. I'd love to see more of Picard's ex-Tal'Shiar housekeeper from the first three episodes; the actress was terrific, and I was actively disappointed when she didn't return later in the season.

I would also love for the series to revisit the idea of a Federation that has gone slightly wrong. That was one of the strongest elements of the season's first half, and I feel it was a major missed opportunity to drop that thread for the second half. If they could pick that thread back up and do something with it, I think it could be potentially interesting.


IN CONCLUSION:

"Potential" is a word that comes to my mind a lot when thinking about Picard's first season. There was a lot of potential here for a fine show. Unlike some, I found this to be an enjoyable season; I'd rank it above at least three seasons of TNG (and I think Trek fandom sometimes forgets how uneven much of TNG really was).

That said, this season only occasionally realized its potential. The ideas were present for Season One of Picard to be a remarkable piece of television, and there are glimpses of that in Maps and Legends, The Impossible Box, and Broken Pieces. The rest of the time, however, the series contented itself with being merely serviceable.

It was still better than three of the four TNG movies, mind you... But I'd like to see that bar set just a bit higher than that.


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1-10. Et in Arcadia Ego, Part 2.

Picard, in command of La Sirena, prepares to confront a Romulan fleet!

Original Air Date: Mar. 26, 2020. Written by: Michael Chabon. Directed by: Akiva Goldsman.


THE PLOT:

The end is nigh.

Sutra's deception has succeeded: Soji, Soong, and the androids are all in agreement about sending the signal encoded in The Admonition. This will result in the summoning of advanced synthetics who will save the androids... at the expense of all organic life!

Narek has a plan. He sneaks into the Artifact to recover enough explosives to destroy the transmitter. Knowing he can't succeed in this effort alone, he appeals to Rios, Raffi, and Elnor for help - though Elnor seems as inclined to kill him as listen to him.

Meanwhile, Jurati breaks Picard out of confinement. Just as Oh (Tamlyn Tomita)'s Romulan fleet arrives, Picard tries a gamble of his own - a final bid to stop the Romulans and to prevent the synthetics from transmitting their deadly message!


CHARACTERS:

Picard: "I am trying to pilot a starship for the first time in a very long time, without exploding or crashing!" One thing the finale gets right is Picard himself. While Rios and most of the crew try to stop the signal, Picard launches into orbit in La Sirena with only Dr. Jurati to assist. This brings Picard full circle: Gone is the bitter old man from the winery, and in his place is the confident Starfleet captain. "The Picard Maneuver" is even utilized to catch the Romulans' attention to delay their attack - well, a significantly enhanced version of it. Patrick Stewart is marvelous, as always, and it's appropriate that the finale centers in large part around him making a plea relying on reason and morality - always Picard's greatest tools - rather than relying on threats and brute force.

Riker: As with Seven of Nine's first appearance at the end of Absolute Candor, I feel Jonathan Frakes's billing should have been reserved for the end credits to preserve the surprise. But since they slap "Special Guest Star: Jonathan Frakes" right on there, I'll observe that Riker gets a decent supporting role, in a way that effectively follows up on his scenes with Picard in Nepenthe, with Riker's ongoing support for and belief in his old C. O. coming through strongly.

Data: The season opened with Picard dreaming of Data, and it closes with a fully conscious Picard speaking to Data thanks to a computer simulation. Brent Spiner's age is visible despite the best efforts of the makeup crew (and likely some CGI enhancement), but the scene is a nice touch, the two men speaking thoughtfully about the value of mortality. Though I wasn't particularly upset with Data's original sendoff, this quiet conversation, followed by a moment in which Data listens to Blue Skies (the song he sang at Riker's wedding) is a far more appropriate final bow for the character.

Dr. Soong: Data's curtain call does not spell the end of Spiner's Star Trek involvement, not so long as the Soong dynasty continues to have every male member look exactly like him. Alton Soong is appalled when he learns that Sutra helped Narek not only to escape, but to kill one of her own sisters to push the androids into sending the signal. "Turns out you're no better than we are," he says, the disappointment heavy in his voice. I hesitate to call this a redemption; Soong was entirely willing to commit genocide until he found out that his "children" are just as capable of selfishness and deception as all other sentient beings. He may end up being not quite a villain... but I find myself ultimately agreeing with Picard's assessment, when he states, "I don't much care for him."

Soji: Her encounter with Narek in the previous episode really should have been better written, as its apparent that their conversation in conjunction with Sutra's deception has pushed her into activating the signal.  She's the target of Picard's plea, and she is also the ultimate target of Oh's planned attack, meaning that the entire resolution revolves around her choice. Since we're never in doubt as to what she'll do, the stakes revolve more around the character than the plot. Unfortunately, in this episode, Soji feels more like a plot device than a person, leaving all of our character investment purely with Picard, which blunts the effectiveness of an otherwise generally well-executed climax.

Dr. Jurati: It turns out that she was lying when she pretended to be on the side of Sutra and Soong. When Soong congratulates her on the "sacrifice" she is willing to make as the androids' "mother," Jurati smiles and nods... until he leaves, when she spits out, "I'm not their mother, asshole." The endearing geek-girl side of her, seen in her Episode Three grin when Picard said, "Make it so," pops up again as she breaks Picard out, all the while amazed that no one has detected "the worst secret agent ever." Alison Pill, who's been too often pushed to the sidelines, seems to revel in her meatier role this episode. Still, I can't help but wonder at how all of her actions from the mid-season seem to be completely forgiven (even forgotten) by the ending scenes.

Narek: Thankfully, the one-dimensional pod-Narek of the previous episode is gone. Once he sees the transmitter, Narek is smart enough to go to the La Sirena crew to urge a truce to try to stop what is coming. Just as refreshingly, both Rios and Raffi are entirely willing to listen to him. They're wary, but they listen, and manage to form a plan to get back into the compound.

Seven of Nine: Her role in the finale is... underwhelming. I expected that she would be working to get the Borg's defenses back online to help in stopping the Romulans. This does not happen. Instead, Seven participates in the climax by getting into a fight with Narissa (who returns, both inexplicably and unnecessarily, after having been seemingly dispatched at the end of Broken Pieces). This entire bit feels like something spun out of whole cloth just to give Seven something to do. Much better is her final conversation with Rios, which reminds us that Jeri Ryan is actually a very good actress, something I hope Season Two makes better use of.

Oh, and perhaps following in the tradition of Voyager (which apparently ended with her in an inexplicable relationship with Chakotay), a shot near the end implies a new romantic relationship... with a character opposite whom she has barely shared screentime! I'll reserve judgement on this until I see it play out - but I can't help but wonder why this development wasn't saved for Season Two, when there might have been time to lay groundwork for it.


THOUGHTS:

"Fear is a poor teacher."
-Admiral Jean-Luc Picard, retired.

The entire crisis of Et in Arcadia Ego, and of Picard's first season in general, is because of fear. The Zhat Vash's entire existence traces back to fear of synthetics. That led them to sabotage Picard's rescue mission - of Romulus, no less - which in turn led to Starfleet banning synthetics... an overreaction born out of fear. Actions taken by both Starfleet and the Romulans have led the synthetics to feel backed into a corner, ready to lash out from fear of their own annihilation, in an attitude of "it's us or them"... a reaction that, as Picard observes, will make them into the very destroyers the Romulans have prophesied.

Picard has no capacity to go toe-to-toe with the Romulans, let alone the unknown synthetics. He has one ship against hundreds. Oh's initial reaction to La Sirena is to ignore it. Picard instead uses his wits to draw the Romulans' attention, all to delay the bombardment long enough to get Soji to listen as he pleads with her to make a better choice.

Related to the theme of fear throughout the season, we have also witnessed characters justifying their actions by claiming they have "no choice." Dr. Jurati felt she had no choice but to murder Bruce Maddox. The Zhat Vash insist they have no choice but to do whatever is necessary to stop the synthetics. Rios's former commander was ordered to commit murder, given no choice if he didn't want his own ship to be destroyed.

When Soji claims that she has no choice but to send the signal, Picard rejects that excuse. He labels it "a failure of imagination," and tells her that the decision to become the destroyer or not is what it has always been: Soji's decision and responsibility, and no one else's... in the process implicating every cry of "no choice" that has been heard throughout the show.

All of this works thematically, the refrains of fear and people feeling they have no choice having built throughout the season. It also works in terms of the story. As an episode, Et in Arcadia Ego, Part 2 builds effectively. Act One establishes the transmitter and the stakes. We then follow two groups - Narek and the La Sirena crew, Picard and Jurati - as they undertake separate actions to try to stop it. The final Act pays off the conflicting issues of the season - not only with the Romulans arriving, but with Picard trying to stop them with an appeal to reason and morality based largely on his own hope and faith in others... showing his own restoration, as such hope and faith would have been far beyond the broken man we saw in Remembrance.

For 45 of its 57 minutes, Et in Arcadia Ego, Part 2 stands as a strong season finale. Not everything works (the Narissa/Seven catfight is as poor as it is superfluous) and there's a bit too striking a resemblance between the glimpse we get of the Doomsday Synthetics and Babylon 5's Shadows (not quite enough to be a copyright infringement, but enough to make me skeptical of coincidence). Still, it's engaging and effective, with the quiet conversations between Rios and Seven, Elnor and Raffi, and finally Picard and Data all serving as an effective button...

And then the ending happens.

If you haven't seen the episode, then stop here, because I don't know how to discuss the ending without spoiling it...

A final conversation between old friends.

A MISJUDGED EPILOGUE

"A butterfly that lives forever is really not a butterfly at all."
-Data inadvertently sums up some of the problems with the ending.

Another theme the episode develops is the value of mortality. In the wonderfully effective Data cameo, Data makes a plea to have the matrix sustaining his intelligence shut down, so that he can experience a life that ends.

This fits with Picard's own arc. He has spent the entire season knowing that his time is short, that this will be his final mission. When he launches into orbit to face the Romulan fleet, he knows it is a one-way trip. He states that he is doing this to offer his life to Soji and her people, in hopes that they will see that they have options other than destruction. When he starts to collapse, he has Jurati inject him with stimulants that aggravate his condition, all so that he can remain alert to make his last appeal. To make his death mean something.

...And then they undermine that entire message by turning Jean-Luc into a frickin' robot!

Yes, Picard's consciousness is transferred into the synthetic "golem" that has been set up for the past two episodes. Even this isn't used effectively. This should frankly horrify him: His worst nightmare is being made into something other than human, as happened with the Borg. Instead, he's assured that everything is fine - He's basically entirely as he would have been minus the terminal illness, nullifying any chance of wringing anything more out of this late development. To all purposes, Picard having his brain put into a new body is nothing more than the most convoluted cure for a disease in recorded history.

This feels like a cheat, because it is a cheat.

Far, far better had the episode ended with Picard's death, with his consciousness fading during that conversation with Data and a tag featuring the other characters' reactions. But then I guess we couldn't have a Season Two. And what's thematic unity compared to keeping the cash cow pumping?


OVERALL:

For all that the ending leaves a bad taste in my mouth, I still have to give Et in Arcadia Ego, Part 2 a good score. For the bulk of its running time - and the entirety of the actual plot - it's highly engaging. The character dynamics are good, and the season's themes are effectively dramatized.

It's a shame about that epilogue, and I'd almost advise hitting "STOP" at the end of the scene with Data. Much like the season itself, however, the flaws of the episode - while evident - aren't enough to keep me from considering it a worthwhile addition overall.


Overall Rating: 7/10.

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1-01. Remembrance.

A mysterious young woman turns to Picard for help.

Original Air Date: Jan. 23, 2020. Written by: Akiva Goldsman, James Duff. Directed by: Hanelle M. Culpepper.


THE PLOT:

It's been more than a decade since a group of rogue androids destroyed the Utopia Planitia Fleet Yards, igniting the atmosphere of Mars and leaving more than 90,000 dead. In the wake of the incident, synthetic life forms were banned throughout the Federation.

Jean-Luc Picard strongly disagreed with that choice and resigned his commission in protest. Now he lives on his family vineyard, filling his time lecturing and publishing books on history. He has no further involvement with Starfleet or with galactic politics.

Dahj (Isa Briones) is a young scientist who is celebrating with her boyfriend after being accepted at the Daystrom Institute, a celebration that is cut short when they are attacked by mysterious hooded figures. Her boyfriend is killed - but when the attackers grab her, she strikes back, dispatching them in a series of rapid movements that should be impossible. A compulsion she cannot explain leads her to seek safety from a man she's never met: Picard.

Picard grants the young woman shelter and a sympathetic ear. It isn't long before the hooded figures prepare another assault, however, leaving him to decide whether he will continue to shut himself away, or whether he will take action.


CHARACTERS:

Picard: The episode opens with him dreaming of being on the Enterprise with Data, an initially pleasant dream that transforms into a nightmare. Still, he tells his Romulan housekeeper (Orla Brady) that he doesn't mind the dreams - What he resents is waking up from them. "Waking up" could almost be the theme of this episode, as Picard seems to slowly stir back to life as the story goes on. After Dahj finds him, he recognizes that he hasn't been living, but rather "waiting to die," hiding away from a universe that he believes has moved in the wrong direction.

Data: Appears courtesy of two dream sequences, the first seeing him playing poker with Picard on the Enterprise and the second showing him working on a half-finished painting. He seems to represent Picard's own emotional state. The shipboard scene ends with Picard drawing out the end of the poker hand, complaining that he doesn't want the game to end... and then he sees Mars out the window, the attack that separated his former life from his present one. The painting dream, which occurs after Picard has met Dahj, ends with Data handing Picard his brush, asking him to finish the work - a sign that Picard's mind is already pushing him to action, and is already making some important connections.

Dahj: Isa Briones makes a positive first impression as the young woman at the center of events. Her first scene establishes a life that's going exactly as it should be, just before it gets turned completely inside out. She is confused and frightened by what is happening to her, but also intelligent enough to pick up on inconsistencies when she tries to contact someone for help and they know just a little too much. She is slightly in awe of Picard, calling him "the great man" - but after meeting this kind but frail old man, she worries that she's putting him in danger.

Dr. Jurati: Actress Alison Pill's second-name billing indicates that she'll be a regular. Without that billing, I would have assumed that she was just a guest character. A researcher in synthetic life, her role in this episode is largely to provide exposition... Well, that and a continuity nod to Star Trek: Nemesis, when she opens a drawer to reveal the disassembled B-4. She does get one wonderfully human moment, however: When Picard asks if someone could have created a sentient synthetic life-form, she laughs - then, when she realizes that he's serious, complains that she wishes he had come in on her day off.


THOUGHTS:

"Sitting here, all these years, nursing my offended dignity, writing books of history people prefer to forget. I never asked anything of myself at all... I haven't been living. I've been waiting to die."

Remembrance is an atypical Star Trek premiere. Save for the opening dream sequence, it is entirely earthbound. Picard is not an active member of Starfleet, but a retired old man who spends his days wishing he was still in a past that he found far preferable to his present. He engages in no particular heroics. The closest to a "heroic confrontation" that he receives is when he snaps at an aggressive reporter (Merrin Dungey) who has turned a supposedly friendly interview into an ambush. He's involved in a single action scene - one in which he's less than useless, finding himself out of breath after running just a few steps. And his beverage of choice has become "Tea, Earl Grey, decaf."

He retains his sharp mind, however. After he meets Dahj, it doesn't take long for him to start drawing connections. He berates himself for hiding away in isolation - but in truth, he's actively investigating the day after Dahj comes to him, and it takes him very little time to start drawing conclusions about her. Patrick Stewart is splendid throughout, carrying this exposition-heavy introduction with the natural authority he's always had, now infused with a bitter melancholy.

After reading many complaints about Picard being slow, I was surprised to find the opposite to be true of Remembrance. In the course of this episode, multiple threads are established, at least one mystery is answered, two quite good action sequences are delivered, and there's an effective ending visual flourish to provide a hook for the next episode. If anything, a few of these beats felt rushed, with some clunky exposition and rough transitions leaving me wishing it had been a 60 minute premiere instead of a 44 minute one.

On the other hand, nothing set up in this premiere is particularly original. There's not exactly much suspense as to whether Picard will help Dahj: (a) It's Picard; (b) There wouldn't be much of a show if he didn't help. Her secret doesn't even qualify as a mystery, as I can't imagine many viewers didn't guess it almost immediately. I am curious to find out more about the android uprising, and the connection of the hooded figures (whose race at least is revealed - but again, that reveal is anything but a surprise). Even these threads feel likely to be well-worn ground, however, with distinct echoes of Blade Runner and the newer Battlestar Galactica sitting alongside the obvious 9/11 parallel.

Still, Remembrance is a promising start. The story may not feel particularly original, at least not so far, but it is intriguing enough to hold my interest. The episode boasts strong production values, with a cinematic look that's deliberately accentuated by its widescreen presentation. I also like Jeff Russo's score, which mixes traditional Trek beats with more atmospheric tones to good effect.

Most of all, it feels good to catch up with Picard. He's older and it shows, his face heavy with lines and his voice crackling with age... all of which lends a depth to his declarations. When he berates the interviewer for being "a stranger to history," his voice doesn't echo with the Shakespearian timbres of the TNG Picard speeches - but I think the denunciation is all the more effective for the weary rasp in which it's delivered.


OVERALL:

Remembrance is perhaps overburdened with exposition, and I suspect an extra 10 - 15 minutes might have done wonders for its pacing.  Still, the good outweighs the bad so far. Though there were no real surprises in this episode, I am interested to see wher the story goes. Most importantly, I'm enjoying seeing Picard twenty years later, and am eager to follow his journey.

Oh, and that closing visual? I don't think the episode could have asked for a better final image...


Overall Rating: 7/10.

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